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lol, Im hoping the opposite from you and that they aren't loli's, and that it was just bad mtl I read, but you do you I guess?

Exactly, I think I read to around 100 chapters, then skimmed to around 300 chapter, and he started off as interesting with his high EQ and ability to turn enemies into friends, then turned into a typical arrogant harem master. Sucks bc the idea was relatively unique compared to all the copy paste trial reads for the past few months

You're irrelevant to me, so thankfully none of your replies actually effects me that much. Im not sad at all, bc you left my mind months ago. Only commented bc I just saw the notification, continue on with the mediocre writing though

Just seeing this bc I dropped this book months ago, but "falling into a daze" over 16 year olds, repeatedly when you are mentally in your 30s is weird. Full stop. It wasnt a slight daze, he went stupid and mute at the sight of them. I have no problem with jade beauties, otherwise I wouldn't have read as far as I did, and I wouldnt read chinese novels in general. it was the fact that EVERY. SINGLE. WOMAN. was a jade beauty, and you couldn't not describe their looks over and over, including one the womans freaking feet. Its tedious to read through. And what author tells someone to repeatedly skip parts of their work? Or you could just not add in those bad writing techniques, which happened way more frequently than you are saying. And I got annoyed because if every female is going to be a jade beauty, have it set in one continent, like other books do. What is the point of combining the worlds population into 1 large continent, when Indians, Africans, Hispanics, and Southeast Asians make up a large percentage of the world population, and then have every single female be jade white?? If you want to change real world stuff in your novel, do that, its your book, but dont be shocked and confused when people call you out on it.

MTL read it. It was below average, the only thing it really had going for it was that the protagonist was a good guy, and some of the villians got to be redeemable, but turned into harem, ofc, and for someone born on earth, he became pretty arrogant and cliche very quickly. By the 200s of chapters, he mind controls some random girl (who in all fairness was contributing killing intent to him), and the first thing he has her do is massage his back for him, then not even a chapter later, holds hands with some girl, decides she is his woman, and he will be ruthless to anyone who even thinks about her...yeah not my cup of tea. If this is picked tho, can translator not repeatedly call some of the girls who end up in his harem little girls? Like over and over they are called little girls, then they contribute eroticism/lust to him, so Im thrown off bc their actions and how they speak are childish af, not how someone over the age of 12 would act. The MC, a 17 year old, calls them little girls, but then theyre freaking have s** dreams and lusting over the mc?? When they say little boy in this, they are always kids, 6 or 7, but when they say little girl in this, how old are they actually?? Rant over