Inkybear

18d

Commented

Yup….. this episode made me drop the whole series now. Cringey chapter

ch 44 The Price of a Lifetime [R-18]

Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder

Sci-fi · bomer_allen

Inkybear

5mth

Commented

He had 4 blocks, not 4 steals in the previous chapters. Better edit that while its early

ch 15 Austin

Super Basketball System

Sports · SuperAlchemist

Inkybear

5mth

Commented

Ooofff, first page grammar errors are tough to ignore.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Liam Nolan

Slice Of Life In Fantasy World

Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal

Inkybear

1yr

Posted

This is the only novel ive read the first 6 chapters in (not even short chapters) and the story is still mysteriously shit. Dropping it

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Inkybear

1yr

Posted

Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.

This book has been deleted.

Inkybear

1yr

Replied to the_god_of_plot

Yeah. The indian english sentence structure around those chapters bothered me so much.

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

Posted

I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

Commented

Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk

ch 16 Thoughts....

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Fantasy · Champsing

Inkybear

1yr

Commented

Need to improve on the writing…. Having Alex thought, alex rolled, Alex came, Alex moved, Alex walked , used in almost every paragraph is horrendous considering he is the only character in the whole chapter.

ch 33 Dungeon Boss

MMORPG : Ancient WORLD

Games · Aibek

Inkybear

1yr

Commented

I hate it when authors/ translators use = equals, or + (plus) as a page/paragraph break. So dumb!!! Hearing equals equals equals 50 times in audio mode is the dumbest thing.

ch 0 8 Employment and Renovation

Game Portal : Making a Multi-Billion Dollar Company!

Urban · KN_Aditya

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Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder

Super Basketball System

Slice Of Life In Fantasy World

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

MMORPG : Ancient WORLD

Game Portal : Making a Multi-Billion Dollar Company!