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Harry Potter and the Lord of Darkness
MotivatedSloth: I was kinda on the verge of falling asleep when writing that chap, so I might have shifted the tone a bit. When I will finally generate some stockpile, I will get to rewriting the bad parts of the story so in some time it will be changed. HopefullyWhile Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C90
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C90
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C30
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C27
lumydee: Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍I'm the King Of Technology
ApocalypseX: Hey guys!
ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;)
Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating.
Update Schedule - Daily.
I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more.
Enjoy reading! :)
P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.Fate Online: Shadow
GunnerRunner: They trained on the 3rd FloorDevil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C23
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Horusz: A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap.
the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is.
One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG.
The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never.
One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask.
Keep up the wonderful work.Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C14
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Issou: It could be very good but I'm just tired of bashing fics. If you dislike some characters as an author I can understand but don't make it so obvious.
I mean McGonagall owning 3 contracts (2 of them are pretty much obvious scam) and trying to cheat him is too much. Dumbledore weakening the magical England to keep his position as the strongest wizard is bull**** too, he is an old man and he is clearly not an idiot.
You wrote smth like "humans are greedy". Yeah maybe, but then stop lowering their IQs for no reasons. It's like you are trying to make your MC appear as a clever kid by bashing clever characters. I could appreciate an evil Dumbledore/McGonagall if it was well written, but here it's just bashing.
Otherwise, I guess the MC is not bad. Typical Mary Sue but at least he isn't a scum. A bit sad you didn't develop the muggle side ( Yknow he lived for 11 years but we don't know any characters aside from Sherry and his mother. We don't know his acquaintances, his school teachers, his karaté teacher, ...).
His bloodline trait is interesting, his magical training a bit too smooth but that's not a real problem.
Just my opinion, you can disagree.Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
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Lorelynf: Dense? Don't like dense mc. So this is not worth to read?I'm the King Of Technology
Demonic_angel: This one won't, even if it don't gain any popularity, I'll give it a proper endingRise of the Demon God · C49
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