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i didnt read that because the synopsis said he'll lose memory everytime, so is it the same now too?
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Harry Potter and the Lord of Darkness
15 hours ago

MotivatedSloth: I was kinda on the verge of falling asleep when writing that chap, so I might have shifted the tone a bit. When I will finally generate some stockpile, I will get to rewriting the bad parts of the story so in some time it will be changed. Hopefully

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C90
15 hours ago
i can accept talking formal to his seniors, but why to eve? View More
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C90
16 hours ago
I'm thinking you hate up mc, that's why he's not getting stronger View More
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C30
1 day ago
Make him use attributes, it's not changing from so many chapters lol View More
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! · C27
1 day ago
will he be ok in the future, or still have no idea why a girl blushes View More

lumydee: Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍

I'm the King Of Technology
1 day ago
forgot tag op mc XD View More

ApocalypseX: Hey guys!

ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;)

Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating.

Update Schedule - Daily.

I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more.

Enjoy reading! :)

P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.

Fate Online: Shadow
1 day ago
enough? View More

GunnerRunner: They trained on the 3rd Floor

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C23
1 day ago
whens the training? View More
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C23
2 days ago
Who the heck is amik View More
Business-Man Naruto · C5
3 days ago
Every things ok, waiting for training montage View More
The Dusk Emperor · C15
4 days ago
I Would have loved seeing someone destroyed lumen's arrogance coz he still thinks hes op View More
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C6
4 days ago
hope he will not continue being a killing maniac View More
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C5
4 days ago
whats mc's power View More

Horusz: A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap.

the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is.

One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG.

The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never.

One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask.

Keep up the wonderful work.

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
5 days ago
wow you explained about cruel about the world, and you signed without looking? XD lol View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C14
5 days ago
Reading Status: C0
will you complete it?
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DC: Primordial Beast
5 days ago
@Archneil
just change the title and make him go to other worlds, write the world which youre interested in present and go hiatus after that or jump him to other worlds XD View More
True Vampire in Teen Wolf · C68
5 days ago
guess most of you said is true, coz i cant see authors reply XD View More

Issou: It could be very good but I'm just tired of bashing fics. If you dislike some characters as an author I can understand but don't make it so obvious.
I mean McGonagall owning 3 contracts (2 of them are pretty much obvious scam) and trying to cheat him is too much. Dumbledore weakening the magical England to keep his position as the strongest wizard is bull**** too, he is an old man and he is clearly not an idiot.
You wrote smth like "humans are greedy". Yeah maybe, but then stop lowering their IQs for no reasons. It's like you are trying to make your MC appear as a clever kid by bashing clever characters. I could appreciate an evil Dumbledore/McGonagall if it was well written, but here it's just bashing.

Otherwise, I guess the MC is not bad. Typical Mary Sue but at least he isn't a scum. A bit sad you didn't develop the muggle side ( Yknow he lived for 11 years but we don't know any characters aside from Sherry and his mother. We don't know his acquaintances, his school teachers, his karaté teacher, ...).
His bloodline trait is interesting, his magical training a bit too smooth but that's not a real problem.

Just my opinion, you can disagree.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
5 days ago
this is good if there will be chapter coming immediately after this View More
The Strongest Omni Traveler · C179
5 days ago
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My New Life In Another World · C19
5 days ago
can he increase his stats? View More
Not So Lonesome Road · C33
5 days ago
the guy doesnt learn anything properly lol, first he did the same with chakra, now doing with breath style wtf XD View More
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C261
6 days ago
Mc became stupid and forget ki sense, lol View More
[EMERALD]❇️ · C17
1 week ago
feel like i started in the middle of the novel, no idea of world background and characters background, bad introductions View More
RETURN OF THE SHADOW · C5
1 week ago
well he wont know why a girl blushes, so i think mc is same as any japanese mc View More

Lorelynf: Dense? Don't like dense mc. So this is not worth to read?

I'm the King Of Technology
1 week ago

Demonic_angel: I corrected the pointed out ones

Rise of the Demon God · C11
1 week ago

Demonic_angel: This one won't, even if it don't gain any popularity, I'll give it a proper ending

Rise of the Demon God · C49
1 week ago
in every cultivation mc intend to go back but only after 100 chapters novel would be dropped, poor mc XDXDXD View More
Rise of the Demon God · C49
1 week ago
now hes flirting like he knew her before *sigh* View More
Rise of the Demon God · C38
1 week ago
so only when he couldnt go more than 50 meters, he remember he need more strength 😕😕 View More
Rise of the Demon God · C21
1 week ago
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