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  • Legend of Bumi

    Legend of Bumi

    Fantasy

    4.2

    In this world. Sword and magic is an common skill to survive. Our protagonist coming from Earth, and he was the only one who understand about cultivation technique. Ardyan Lie woke up in another world. Half of his memories was lost, only a part of his knowledge still remains. This was not the same earth that he once knew. Then he met with Nero who worked for the Cross Guard, an organization that delivered goods and valuables. To join the Cross Guard, Lie had to go through a series of test, with the first among them being a battle test with weapons. He realized that this new world was cruel. Kill or be killed is normal in here. However, Lie didn't have any other choice. To keep himself survived, he must using his Martial Arts technique at the fullest combined with Mana--magic concept on this world. This story will lead you to the big conflict on Terra. The battle of Star Bringer that will decide the fate of humankind.

  • Quest as Ogre Gamer (Spin off Legend of Bumi)

    Quest as Ogre Gamer (Spin off Legend of Bumi)

    Fantasy

    This is a story where the result and progress decided by you. Rules : 1. There will be multiple choices that will affect the story. 2. Comment in the chapter with the storyline that you desired. 3. I will count the comment and choose the most demanded choice. 4. If no one giving a comment, I will choose the storyline randomly.

Moments

Reading Status: C4
The narration is very good. Its bring my imagination to the story perfectly. And also i love the world building, such an interesting concept specially about the dark knight and immortality. This kind of story need a lot efford for develop and i appreciate how the author can bring it to us. View More
Crimson Gloom
2 months ago
Reading Status: C5
In the beginning i feel like this story have a slice of life vibe. I enjoyibg to follow the pace. But everythibg is changed on chapter 3 and it become more interesting each chapter. I love how the author can show the phoenix image in this story. I hope, on the future, the adventure of main character will become an amazing one. View More
Featherlow: Bird Out of Paradise
2 months ago

ElaryWakefield: I am loving this world. I want my sky to be purple filled with stars!
Either way, I feel like writing is very smooth and everything is easy to visualize and follow. I have only read the first chapter but I'm already hooked.
I can't wait to read more!

Legend of Bumi
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Adopted Soldier · C5
2 months ago
Reading Status: C0
I hope you can play together with me in this novel.
Well, i giving my own story 5 stars... eh... this is unethical.
what should i write with this annoying 140 character rules??!! View More
Quest as Ogre Gamer (Spin off Legend of Bumi)
1 year ago
kedua View More

Unoz: Pertama

Legend of Bumi · C5
1 year ago
Thanks, the typo already fixed.
And, the brother maybe only wanna feel important from helping the MC.
Yes, it's doesnt matter how bad our relationship with our brother... he will help us when we need... with some egoism lecture... right? View More

Newlife256: theres some typo in the chapter like he didnt want to really to his Sister.. that should be Brother right?

second im bit confused since his brother hate him why he should help him learn martial art to motivated him? shouldnt his brother rejoice for the fact that his brother was become some useless person and he can get their parents attention back..

Legend of Bumi · C4
1 year ago
No. He not overpowered. At least for now. You will see how weak he is in a battle at chapter 6 View More

Arkyong: Yeah, and what about that arrest ob the last part?

Legend of Bumi · C3
1 year ago
Please bear with that idiot (the MC) attitude. Yes, he will learn a lot from several tragedy View More

Arkyong: MC is very talkative

Legend of Bumi · C1
1 year ago
thanks for giving me courage. View More
Legend of Bumi · C7
1 year ago
Thanks. Maybe it's hard for me to update everyday because i'm work as assistant of comic author and the deadline is scary T_T

*The comic will published in COMICO Indonesia. (official)

Hopefully it's will go international.

Comico = comic platform that published ReLife manga (there are anime and live action of this manga) View More
Legend of Bumi · C7
1 year ago
Thanks for your reference. But it's too generic for me.
I understand why you won't be able to like my type of story.
As for me, won't be able to like your reference, or yours..

It's about personal taste. View More

Soren_Lev: I might share my bits of personal sentiment here, but I found this story lacking in so many aspect. I will tolerate the grammar and everything, because I know how sucks it is having a barrier language.

What I am trying to share is the fact that the development of this story wasn't really that good, at least yet. I couldn't see it other than your typical using "Another World" troupe as per se.

The humor itself I found it to be quite dry, it's trying to be funny but in practice, not so much. It's need to be more improved a lot to get to the point where the humor could I considered acceptable. I suggest for you to read some story that has the subtle yet revealing humor like Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich as it was one of the best out there.

The fighting scene which trying to be cool but nope, it wasn't. It just need to be polished and having the detail geared up though, and everything will be set to go.

I might say that following your own pace is important, so just keep it up.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Thanks for the review.
I think i know who is this, haha View More

Nearata: First, thanks for ur hardwork!
I can't give much review ...
But i like how the story was flow.
Actually, my grammar is rather poor too, as English is not my native language. So, i can't help u improve ur grammar skill or i can do much review for this story, haha. Anyways, keep it up!

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Yes. I often spoil my story on FB.
Btw, who is this? View More

TheLastSupper: I've read the outline (draft) of this story in the author original language (from his facebook). I never think that English language is the biggest obstacle for him. To be honest, the novel itself has a complex plot, twist, drama, etc. I appreciate author resolution to keep learning English. As a support, I will give you a good rate.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Yona, is that you? View More

Yuigahama: This is my brother novel. I encourage him to write on qidian. Already know the story because he tell the tale every night to me. Every single night! On the future, a lot of main character will die.
Even some character become enemy. Lie will become antihero. And likemore, a villain. This story should be tragedy, later.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Thank you. I will try to improve my english. View More

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Legend of Bumi
1 year ago

Yohanlie: This is an author.
Please give me review to improving this novel. Thank you.
English is not my 1st language. But, i will keep it up.
Thank you for everyone who give me powerstone, review, and encourage me.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago

Dr_Zombie: Hmm, this novel is very hard to read and needs an editor or a proofreader of some kind to go over it. I can understand that English may not be the author's first language, but it still needs some more work. I give you props for actually writing a story though, so just keep at it and you will surely improve. I can't really comment on the story progression so far, as it is only the beginning. However, I shall keep an eye on this novel and see what the future brings.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago

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Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Reading Status: C3
This is an author.
Please give me review to improving this novel. Thank you.
English is not my 1st language. But, i will keep it up.
Thank you for everyone who give me powerstone, review, and encourage me. View More
Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Thank you. Revision always an option when i improved my english. View More

Dr_Zombie: Hmm, this novel is very hard to read and needs an editor or a proofreader of some kind to go over it. I can understand that English may not be the author's first language, but it still needs some more work. I give you props for actually writing a story though, so just keep at it and you will surely improve. I can't really comment on the story progression so far, as it is only the beginning. However, I shall keep an eye on this novel and see what the future brings.

Legend of Bumi
1 year ago
Hmmm View More
Legend of Bumi · C1
1 year ago
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