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number one fanfic in this website* i think i deleted that part, or its some sort o bug.

3 stars overall score, why? because author decide to have 3 chapters with 3 different personality for the mc. He says that he will get revenge blah blah blah but its just a clear edgelord type of fanfic. Also, this is cliche galore, honestly, its a bit better than other webnovels here but not that much. Writing quality 4 stars- why? because its decent compared to other webnovels here, author leaves comments in chapters that are almost the same size as the whole chapter but yeah, oh and pls plsplsplspls send powerstones to the guy , wtf man are you thanos or what?~ updates-5 stars i dont think that he misses a update since he has written chapters in advance and at this point i dont care... Story- Have you ever ever ever in your entire writing carreer the phrase SHOW DON´T TELL ? World Background- cliche , and not tastefully done cliche like you expect someone who wrote a fanfic with almost 200 chapter about the same freaking world. Honestly dissapointed and more dissapointed since this is freaking number one fanfic in here, like wtf?

No romance till chap 40 but i think it will have romance, the way the plot goes... :D BTW its a very good fanfic, not very good in first chapters but it gets better, for those who are hesitating.

Exactly, writing quality is pretty good the rest is just a mess im at chapter 73 and i regret i wasted my time. The start was so good, with his mentality and all of that, it just transforms into a harem seeking protagonist... I was expecting more with that start, totally disappointing.

Thanks i was actually just about to click read button but not now, good day to you.

Thanks, i didnt know he wrote the elder witcher fanfic i dropped that too.

----------------MASSIVE SPOILER ------------- What did happen? After he loses his hand and author nerfed him i dropped but now i was thinking of giving a shot, now i read you review and i dont want to waste time, so can you tell me why? thanks

Why you dont have more upvotes? This is freaking true, i think it was at chapter 200+ when i stopped reading, he goes hiding and overcomes the obstacle, 1,2 chapters of relative peace , guess what another obstacle appears and he hides, and thats not all, what does the mc do? train and become stronger? No, he helps his friends because 5 ants can kill a freaking elephant that type of analogy. Thats why i dont invest my time and money in this novel.

hey to you too

First review so lets get it going. W.Q - Its pretty well written without grammar mistakes as far as i can see. The problem are interactions between characters, more show dont tell type of thing. oh, and the formatting its a bit clunky lets say, too much text without paragraphs .. etc S.U - No problems here , 1 update per day or something like that its very good for a fanfic, S.D - Very good i like where this is going and honestly it always keeps me at edge and waiting for more. C.D - Pretty nicely fleshled out protagonist notinh to comment here, the only problem i have a the other characters, you need to make me( as a reader) care for them or have an emotion about them , basically what i have to say is that sometimes it cames as boring or stale character and i lose interest but nothing alarming. W.B - Witcher . Nothing to say here.The character ( you know who) you added its a good addition and something in the likes of Gaunther O´Dimm. TLDR - Its a good story and i honestly hope to see you succed in completing this story. Witcher Fanfics are rare and a good fanfic are even harder to find. Thank you for the amazing work , and keep at it, i always (when i remember) vote for your work. Sorry for misspelng but im pretty tired and hopefully you can understand what im tring to say.