repeat please fix
ch 29 Chapter 29 : kunou
Anime & Comics · Fanfiction_fan
Lo e the story but is it ever going to get an update?
ch 59 A small yet heavy word
Fantasy · DemonicPanda
Glad for the chapter but it felt really rushed and not how do I say relevant I mean it can be a side chapter and all but it seemed rather pointless. Interesting though that he can't go anywhere besides young justice worlds yet
ch 11 Portal Travel
TV · Unknownducky
yes
OK I get wanting to be a saiyan in the DBZ universe. it's just I was looking forward to a human story I mean you gave him that system already and the potential skill. That should been enough you could of had him wish the best trainer knowledge in the universe or something like that. It's just ashame you had to make him wish to be a saiyan.
ch 0 1 Namek
Anime & Comics · onsatsu
if harem at most 3-5 so it can develope easier and if not just Cana all the way.
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Anime & Comics · Man_Of_Mystery
I love these Pet Avengers chapters they are great!!!
ch 67 Issue #.5
Anime & Comics · BoredAsura
OK I think it would be a nice curve ball if his third character is Starfire. I mean come on let him feel like what a woman feels but don't take it to far like sexual or anything just emotions and stuff. Also he could get some cravings for Starfires weird homeworld food. Plus I think Nightwing is to plain for him right now I mean don't get me wrong Nightwing is cool great abilities and good if you want to take him in a smart guy detective route. I also think Gilgamesh would be to powerful right now maybe 2 or 3 more character down the road same for Madera as Gilgamesh he would be to powerful for him right now it would leave no growth potential.
ch 14 14...A week and New year(2010)
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
why did you make Goku introduce himself as Kakarot
ch 0 1 Fateful encounter
Anime & Comics · OriosGrafeas
You should have released two chapter this one was to short. Good job though I enjoyed it.
ch 187 Revival, Rebirth, Return
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
love the work so far and it's called Solar Flare not flash bomb but hey its all good great job.
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Movies · MAX_2020
I wouldn't add N to the camp his character was sheltered his whole life I would keep it that way. I get changing something's cause it's a fan fiction but some should be left the same to keep some plot.
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Anime & Comics · Aht
So good I need more keep up the great work.
ch 13 Friendly match.
Anime & Comics · Kokekokoko
love it keep it up and maybe publish a little faster but you do you and I like how he had to work for magic. I'm not to sure about super early trunks but I get it it's already and AU with Lux there so keep it going real good so far.
ch 0 6 Time is complicated.
Anime & Comics · Mike_Lu
I don't get it ugh I just want to read without interruption. Now I try to go to his patreon and it's showing up 404 so even if want to read the dang chapter I can't.
ch 62 Forbidden Relationship
Reincarnated in the Nakano Family with Sign-in System
Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin