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Edy3: So why did she consume the three lower pills? She could wait to see the effect of the enhancing before that. She just wasted 12% recovery. I would understand consuming them before the enhancing so she have better chance to succeed, but why after the enhancing?

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C352
1 week ago
I read it but I don’t really see anything wrong with it? Maybe because I read it without context? Just seems like a normal chapter if you read it separately from the previous chapters. View More

AquaMarini: if you think this is bad, you should check out abyss domination chapter 85....

Surviving In My Novel · C2
2 weeks ago

Sythcake: Really?! You know.. there’s a thing called - keeping your fucking mouth shut. which would pretty much let him deal with everything happening in this chapter.. From what I understand, he was just some random civilian A and had no reason to interfere with a fucking ARMED ROBBERY! Next, he can absorb sum sun after it’s all over and be on his fucking way to whatever it is retards like him usually do.

And even if he ended up being caught by PRT, yelling that he is a god fucking alien and his powers rely on the motherfucking sun(basically tells them what he is and his stregths and weakness) is fucking next level retarded. Instead he could just shut the **** up, wait to catch some sun and gtfo.
Besides, despite all their fancy gadgets and op superheros, PRT’s competence can be compared to Marvel’s Shield. Both are a complete ****show


The fact that I have to explain obv **** like that is even more annoying so **** you! >.<

My Self-Insert Stash · C37
1 month ago

RighteousDemon: I was excited when i saw a kryptonian insert, i was thrilled when i saw that it was in worm. Now i want to find the author and punch him. I very rarely get personal about anything on the internet BUT my god is the mc completely stupid and unlikable. He legit made me angry. And i tried to keep reading because the premise is awesome but i couldnt. God now i'm pissed for no reason*sigh*.

My Self-Insert Stash · C37
1 month ago
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Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C528
1 month ago
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Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C528
1 month ago
Such a gross chapter. "Oh yeah, let's invite everyone to my pity party. I'm so weak, boohoo. I'm unworthy of the people who like me WAAAA. Oh no, why am I so weak, let me just think about friendship and magic while I'm dying. I'm not dying because I'm retarded, it's because I'm not trying hard enough. I don't believe in the power of friendship and love enough. Oh wow! After believing in the power of friendship and love, I suddenly gained a bs protagonist powerup! Now I can easily kill all the baddies." How fucking quaint. I could barely fucking read the chapter without wanting to go on a murderous spree. I despise when protagonists host a pity party and then somehow power-up because they thought of their so/family just before they die. So unoriginal and uninspired. View More
Lust Knight · C20
1 month ago
Yes, at least mc's who think with their dicks give me some good smut to read. Dense mc's don't have any such redeeming qualities. Although, if you're talking about protagonists who think with their dicks but are also too pussy to fulfill their desires, then no, those virgins are even worse than dense protagonists. View More

Niveus_Deity: Altough I am also s!ck of dense mc but calling it disgusting...can they be worse than a brainless d!ckhead b*stard of a mc that only knows how think with their d!ck?

I'm the King Of Technology
1 month ago
If you want to read the full thing, look it up on fanfiction(dot)net, this is just a repost. Full link: ***(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/s/12568681/9/Naruto-s-Quest View More

SYIHAAKIRA: Hello there Inoharamito.
I love to give 5 stars for your novel because.
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.
Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel.
I hope can read more and more a chapter every day.
I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy.
Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

Naruto's Quest(18+)
1 month ago

XIETIAN: I am removing this from my library .. The MC is a sissy who can not fight with anyone because your system stops .. that **** is this? to see a coward pants I prefer not read this crap. His enemy was going to kiss Maya and what all you can do ?? Oh no, no do not want this .. pfff that story so disgusting

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems) · C75
1 month ago

Orthanos: Don i know why you got trouble writing. You now have started Skyrim. Skyrim was so open to exploration that the urgency of time does not exist in the game. You can do anything, go anywhere, and be there at any time.

The game continues and changes with time but all the main events never follow with those changes.

What i would do is make a plan in priority of urgency and maybe watch some speed runs to see the fastest conclusion of where to go, and so when you find your destination, add in your quest for power along the way. Use the true skyrim 100% complete map to plot out where you can continue areas for Jon's growth. Plan your dragon attacks and maybe even some which Jon can never make it.

Just my opinion though. Write when want, and finish when you think it's enough. That is all we can ever ask. Don't worry about when or the frequency you release chapters, Release them when you are comfortable about them.

Dragonborn Saga · C507
1 month ago

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Shield Hero with Barrier Magic
1 month ago
I want to be the very best,
Like no one ever was.
To catch them is my real test,
To train them is my cause!
(I will travel across the land,
Searching far and wide.
Each Demon God to understand
The power that's inside!)
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Demon Gods!
Oh, you're my best friends,
In a world we must defend!
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
De-mon-Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
Every challenge along the way,
With courage I will face!
I will battle every day,
To claim my rightful place!
Come with me, the time is right,
There's no better team!
Arm in arm, we'll win the fight,
It's always been our dream!
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Demon Gods!
Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
De-mon-Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Demon Gods!
Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!
Demon Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
De-mon-Gods!
Gotta catch em' all!
Gotta catch em' all!
De-mon-Gods! View More
Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C354
1 month ago
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Shield Hero with Barrier Magic
1 month ago
Reiki has been a thing for a pretty long time. I know 'Bleach' used it a lot, and that was first published in 2001, so it's not like Reiki is some new thing in literature. View More

TheeUnknownSaint: So "Reiki" is actually a thing in Novels now? Even 'The Sword Deity in Tokyo' has such a thing now.

Mini World Of Endless Fun Awaits · C26
1 month ago
Reading Status: C3
Clicked on this because it had a five-star review, but it's obviously just faked by the authors' alt accounts. The writing quality is about what you'd expect from a 3rd grader. I can't really comment on update stability, but I'll put 1 star because this book doesn't deserve 5. Story development? Uh, no. Character design? What design? World background? Welcome to Valoram, wherever that is. This is a trash fic, so I wouldn't recommend anyone to read it. I can't really be bothered to give a proper review since I only review books that I think have potential. I'm just doing this one because I don't like it when authors try to mislead people with a fake rating. View More
zero..ks(CANCELED) (01)
2 months ago

Apri_7531: This is why I don't like Nerf mc . Not funny at all.

What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes? · C97
2 months ago

queenfern: Whoa. More of that precious tea. See how much your country values you, Lu Zhou? 😏

Scholar's Advanced Technological System · C468
2 months ago
You mention that from the angle they can't see the gun now, but it wasn't mentioned in the chapter. You also say that Izuku was smiling at the black ghost, but it only says he's surprised, then tells the ghost to continue ripping Jhin's mask off. You also mention that he's in a room for highly damaged patients, which are large, but that doesn't get described during any part of the scene. I personally thought that it was an average room. It could also, as you said, be a large room, but it could also be a small private room. I guess this is more of an issue of you not managing to convert the image in your head into the actual chapter. If you want your readers to know these things, it's usually better to tell them through the details of the scene, so you might want to start describing your scenes more. I guess my main issue wasn't them shooting Izuku instead of Jhin, even though I find it quite annoying. My main issue with the chapter is the cliche of the villain getting away because the protagonist was distracted just before he could finish him off. It happens so fucking often that I'm just sick and tired of it. It's so much plot convenience that it isn't even funny. He manages to shoot the black ghost because Izuku looks away for a second? Why didn't Izuku think to get the gun out of his hand first, or better yet, restrain him in a way that wouldn't allow him to move his hands? He's supposed to be a genius after all. The whole thing is just so convenient that I hate it. If you have to lower your protagonists IQ to make a scene work, then you should find a way to rework it. That's my opinion at least. View More

AkiHuiWriting: I did some changes to Ajin and The Gamer quirk before so that's that. While I understand where you are coming from I still have to disagree. Seeing your dead colleagues on the ground is one thing, guards aren't trained enough like soldiers or policeman. They don't have basic training. When they see something brutal that already puts them into panic. When they walked into a room, they saw Izuku smiling at a 2m tall black ghost who was holding a man in a mask by the collar. I would personally shoot the demon child lol. Moreover out of the angle from the door, they weren't able to see that Jhin was armed at first and like I said. There was no range for the tasers. That room wasn't the average room since it was the Urgent room for the people with the worst damaged bodies which is big asf at least in my hospital. There were **** tons of beds and obstacles all around the room. Tell me this, would you shoot at the boy who is clearly unharmed and pretty much looks like he is controlling a black monster or a guy with a mask who is getting choked to death by the monster?

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C0
2 months ago
When was it stated that the invisibility gets disrupted when it holds something? I thought you were using canon rules for the black ghost. If you don't remember, IBM (Invisible Black Matter, the **** that Black Ghosts are made of) cannot be seen by people who are not Ajins. So it is a plot-hole unless you've decided to change up the rules for IBM, which you probably have now that I think back on it, since people shouldn't be able to see it whether Izuku allows it or not. It's more canon friendly that way though, as opposed to allowing just about anybody to see it's holding something (that makes it pretty fucking useless). While I do admit tasers have a certain range and that seeing your headless colleagues on the ground is concerning, you have to remember that Izuku practically looks like an innocent rabbit, while Jhin looks like a psychopathic masked madman, with a gun mind you. Who would you shoot? A young, innocent looking kid, or someone who's clearly armed and dangerous? Also, if they're not in range, nothing is preventing them from getting into range before shooting. It's not like the average room in a hospital is that big. The average size is about 320 square meters, while the effective range of a taser is about 15 feet. Judging by those standards, they'd pretty much be able to shoot Jhin from the door even if he were located on the opposite end of the room. View More

AkiHuiWriting: There is literally no plot hole. You just need to use your brain properly 😅 Blackie was visible to jhin, yes. But it was stated that his invisibility gets disrupted when it gets hit, bumped into or in this case, he was holding Jhin in the air which disrupted his invisibility. As for the guards, everyone would be on the edge if they saw headless bodies of their friends on the ground. They would shoot for the closest thing. In this case guards thought Izuku was his accomplice and together with seeing Blackie left them speechless and they didn't know what was happening so they shot towards the closest person. Also tasers have a certain range and of course they wouldn't shoot for the person who is not in range. If that's all for your questions then I am done. If you have more problems, join my discord and we can discuss "plot holes" 😉

My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C0
2 months ago

Blasphemer: The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it.
Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right?

Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh.

Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too?

Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.

My Multiverse Trip
2 months ago
Way too forced. Who the **** shoots a child and not some masked freak with a gun? They also instantly judged him as the murderer just because he was at the scene when they literally saw a masked dude with a gun jump out the window with a patient. What the **** is this retarded logic. In addition, the black ajin ghost is supposed to be invisible. Jhin could only see him because of the mask, so how did some random guards see it? Honestly, you need to find better ways to further your plot, you also need to re-read your chapters to make sure you don't leave in plot holes like an invisible ghost being seen by a normal person. View More
My Hero Academia: The Ajin Gamer · C0
2 months ago
At first, I thought you were seriously critiquing the novel, but now I can see that you're just a trolling attention seeker. I'm quite disappointed, to be honest. I don't mind it when people state their negative views on a chapter, but that is on the condition that they give proper examples of what they don't like and what the author could do better. This comment is basically just you whining and personally attacking the author, and it's written in such poor English that I can't even tell half of what you're trying to say. Like, what the **** does "how evryone wasn't to have her on his ass" mean???? And how is trolling a guy homophobic? Is she attacking his sexual preference? No. I'm going to assume that you're talking about Chen Yu because he's the only one who really gets trolled. He's not even homosexual for Christ's sake, he was even flirting with the healer girl. You're attacking the author and feminism on the basis that the author is a homophobic feminist, but your "proof" is completely wrong on a fundamental level. Either that or you're just too stupid to know what even half the words you use mean. View More

ERROR404PAGENULL0: Such a bad chapter with repetitive reaction. They haven't changed at all. The same meme reactions for retards. The same plotholes that author tried to cover but made it soo bad that he sucked. Plot progression? Nah lets waste it on useless talks about how awsome Shiro is, how evryone wasn't to have her on his ass. Femenist jokes are already trash. This trolling of the guy is just homofobic. Author of this novel is disgusting as all femenists are. Full of themselves and do trash. Reili isnt guy, she is just a femenist with anger problems. Was suspecting that for long. Now sure.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C275
2 months ago

Demarcy: You can't really say anything about repetitive reaction since you're saying almost the same thing every single chapters (I bet you'll comment to this within 1 hour) *cough* (You're a desperate attention seeker)

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C275
2 months ago
"Women are like horses, with enough skill and patience, you can tame even the wildest mare. Be a man and do the right thing." Big OOF. Just as I was being all happy over there being no anti-Japanese and anti-Korean propaganda, the author pulls this out of his ass. Almost every Chinese web-novel I've read includes at least one phrase like this. Seriously, it seems like Chinese people, in general, have a lot of trouble respecting women. They're almost as bad as people in the middle east who see them as tradeable goods and property (not all of them of course, but still a startling number of them). I can understand phrases like this popping up in novels with ancient settings since historically (in China at least), women were basically worth no more than the man they married, but it's happening even in novels where the setting is modern like this one. It gives a good insight into how a lot of people in China still view women to be inferior breeds, ones that can be whipped and tamed like horses no matter how wildly they scream for equality. View More
Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C334
2 months ago
Uh, the person who’s comment I replied to ONCE didn’t seem to know? I don’t really care if you know or not, and I don’t see how I’m fussing with “everyone” when I only replied to a single comment from a guy who said it was okay to plagiarise. Get your persecution complex in check buddy. View More

Daoisttian_03: Im not saying itisnt but you're fussing with everyone like we didnt know that already

Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System! · C15
2 months ago
Doesn’t mean that it isn’t plagiarism. If you think it isn’t, then I can’t be bothered explaining to you why it is. Just look up copyright and plagiarism laws on your own time. View More

Daoisttian_03: The author already said that is where he got the start of this novel from

Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System! · C15
2 months ago
'Reincarnated as a Dragon’s Egg ~Lets Aim to Be the Strongest~'. He's obviously changed it up a lot now, but you can still see it in the first 10 chapters. View More

Daoisttian_03: What is he plagiarizing?

Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System! · C15
2 months ago
Right, if your grammar were a bit better, maybe I'd understand more of what you're trying to say. All I'm getting from this is that you think the power levels are all over the place and that you feel like the character is being buffed and nerfed all the time. To be honest, I think the power levels make sense. They're not the best, but they're definitely solid enough. I also don't ever remember having felt that the main character was unjustifiably nerfed/buffed. If you gave some examples of how the level system doesn't make sense, or when you feel like the main character got buffed/nerfed for no reason, then maybe I'd be able to agree with you (don't bother if your examples include the standard protagonist power-ups, they happen in practically every novel so they're completely justified). All you're doing now though is just ranting. I sometimes feel like ranting too, but I usually end up giving a critical review, going over what the author did wrong while giving some methods that could fix it. Typing a mean comment and complaining while not saying anything substantial just isn't very helpful. Unless you're commenting on a translated novel. Nobody really cares if you complain about those since the author won't be reading it anyway, so giving constructive criticism is completely useless. View More

ERROR404PAGENULL0: Plot progression? Another character? As if we gave a ****. His power levels are broken. Already asked him wtf before got only "Such levels suck such tiers". He himself many times sais one stuff, to do another. Nerfs her and then buffs her too much an like this. Everything is fkng detailed as ****. Reminds me of realm of myths and legends. God I hated that novel. Just infodumps and it was better still xD.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C273
2 months ago
Okay, but there was some plot progression in this chapter. The main character added another possible helper to her god-slaying party. I feel like that's pretty significant since the main goal of the protagonist is to kill a god. And usually, after people take revenge they find themselves lost on what to do. It's not just in this novel where that might be the case. The monster title is just a typical mc boon or 'gold finger', I don't get why you feel it has to be something filled with meaning. Do you complain when the main characters in novels have op bloodlines? It's basically the same thing. I can see that you're really ****ting on the novel, but you're not really giving any concrete examples, nor are you giving any feedback on what you think could be done better and how. Like how you feel that Shiro has a two-dimensional personality (which I don't feel to be the case at all), and what about the mystery you find so ****ty (I mean it's a pretty standard one, but I wouldn't personally call it ****ty). You're basically just saying "This sucks, I don't like it, **** you." If you're not going to say something with actual substance, you might as well just not say anything at all. It's like when people announce that they're dropping a novel in the comments. Nobody gives a ****, just quietly move on View More

ERROR404PAGENULL0: This chapter is one of the worst by far. No reactions, not even retarded ones. No plot progression, no explanations and another nail on the novels coffin. Now we know that Shiro is a 2D personage, with no personality rather than sadistic, power desiring, no curiosity, without a goal personage. When she gets to kill light hero she will just be T8-9 with no other stuff to do, cause why will I not go to explore, well **** it. Lets become a fkng wood and lay motionless, till something happens to make me move.

Bravo Reili. 100% 2D personages and ****ty mystery. Its not even interesting. Her monster **** is just a title, like "Possible rapist", both are hated, but her at least gives some bonuses. But cause author is writing something cheap, he made it useless and unneeded.

#reilinoveliscrap.
#Nanomancer?RatherCrapmancer
#2Dpersonages100%freewithputmessage/regist

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C273
2 months ago
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