Flajavin - Profile

In just a few chapters that I read the plot barerly had any progress, a 10.000 year old man screamed like a kid just because he was about to get slapped, the author changed his mind about the powers that character had because he realised that he made it too op in the previous chapter and the rest was just useless chatting to add as many words as possible to the chapters. I really don't get it how people actually recommed this book, I'll stop here.

I stopped at ch 1178 so the translation mistakes that I found are from the old team. Shortly after I left this review I also checked the novelupdates website and noticed that there are over 5000 and still ongoing and I realized that so I just stopped. When I started and noticed that there were over 2000 chapters here I believed that that was all. If the book was better(at least for my personal taste) then I would have continued but I can't read another 4000+ chapters like this.

Translation Quality: Lot's of chapters have problems, most common are gender problems, in one chapter a person has a certain gender in another chapter is another gender. Except for those there are multiple grammar mistakes and some sentences that I'm not even sure what they were supposed to mean. Story Development: The way it starts is really weak, lots of parts seem to be copied from other books: - MC teaches someone how to train while he can't cultivate for some reason. Then that person betrays him and tries to kill him later - check - Just when that betrayal happens he can cultivate and escapes and them takes revenge later - check - MC finds a certain place in the world where all the other people consider a death area but he actually is expected there and it's trained there - check ( same for the fact that he returns there multiple times) - MC get to be a student at a certain mysterious but powerful school, like a cultivation heaven, where he meets good friends for life - check - MC meets future GF when he's much weaker than her, then later participates in a contest to choose a husband for her but even though he clearly wins , because of backdoor deals is refused - check All those points above almost seemed copy pasted from other books, at first I actually thought that maybe I already read this book and the forgot about the name. Character Design: Most of the books in this genre make many of their characters complete idiots on order to quickly generate conflicts, but in this book the number is way to exaggerated, and it's not limited to MC and enemies but many random characters that comment for each fight(and yeah, each medium to big fight in the book has to have idiot spectators that comment while not having any idea what they are talking about). This and the fact that the fights consist of just enumerating skill names makes the fight chapters extremely boring. Now when a fight starts I just skip the next 2-3 chapters and just go to the end. I recommend this for everyone. Also skip another chapter or two after the fight is done as those chapters are dedicated only for those random spectators praising the MC for how he won the battle. While doing this I have to say that the book got much shorter and I'm done with half of it in just a a few days, in another 3-4 days I should be done. I can't say much about world background as it's still in progress, nothing impressive so far but maybe there will be some nice story later.

Translation quality seems to be quite low in this book, I don't know why that is but many paragraphs don't make much sense or just seems to be translated almost with some automatic tool. I don't know about the stability of updates as I started it after it was fully translated. I'm at chapter 260 now and so far the main plot is that a girl didn't wanted to marry someone that was chosen for her by her grandparents and instead wanted the freedom to marry who she wants. That guy is of course the MC. I've never seen a worse motivation for training that the one used in this book. It's almost like the author thought that the girl should be a slave and accept to marry whoever others tell her to instead of letting her choose. Because of this so far the main story it's really bad, it has some good points from time to time but the motivation for his training it's so bad that it almost made me drop this book. The world background so far it's not that bad, many things don't make sense but that's common for this type of books so I didn't really had much expectations here. There's still time for this to get better at least.

The story would be ok if not for the MC. It's almost funny how much the author insists that his early progress it's due to his ***** mind and yet he acts like a spoiled child the entire story. I read other books with evil MC but usually they are a bit more mature and have better reasons for their actions but here is really boring. I read almost 500 chapters but I'll have to stop here, I was hoping for some character development but nothing so far, at least nothing good.