Good, but lacks editing, waiting to be edited better, more caps pls.Good, but lacks editing, waiting to be edited better, more caps pls.Good, but lacks editing, waiting to be edited better, more caps pls.
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honestly this fight was very disappointing, spiderman could have killed the vulture with one hand and his spider sense should have been enough that the vulture couldn't even touch him, come on his wings are too big and he doesn't have super human reflexes to keep track of him to the spider and it's not like in the movie where I take it by complete surprise.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 - First Villain
Movies · The_Crimson_Writer
Honestly, the story already seems good enough to me like this... I hope that what you add doesn't affect future chapters since it will be a waste of time having to review all the chapters to find out if there is a change that affects the future plot, I really don't like it like when it happens Things like that force you to reread the story.
ch 0 1 Very important notice!
Anime & Comics · SweatySnail
Esto es demasiado cliché, no puedo ni contar cuantas novelas leí sobre un alquimista o cualquier otra profesión de elaboración que no tiene dinero ni medios para hacer las cosas y de alguna manera de la nada aparece alguien que necesita que le hagan algo urgentemente y le paga una gran suma de dinero al final... realmente esperaba más
ch 0 6 A Slim Opportunity
Urban · LaughingSalt
Siempre debe haber un amigo gordo le da sentido a la vida
ch 0 8 The Blind Date
Eastern · Fu Xiao Chen
La gente no pareció entender que el mejoramiento de memoria fue algo temporal... literalmente incluso si mejora su memoria cuanto realmente podría aprender en poco tiempo? Solo mejora su memoria temporal mente no lo convertirá en un Tony stark con eso no puede hacer nada más que ser un poco más inteligente o saber un poco más...
ch 10 Magical Gift
Urban · Three Rows of Books
feliz de estar aqui apoyo total! happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!happy to be here full support!
Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader