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Villainous systems are nothing new, but packaging it as a remnant soul trying to revive itself was brilliant. I love this take on the setting.

system usurper? Now that's a fun setting for a future novel.

If Leng'an did not record this show I'll be disappointed

This was a really brilliant way to push the story for the harem route. I'm looking forward to how the story progress, but so far it's been a blast

You gave Tilli a magic ring for disguise... And what kind of beast kin would not be able to smell the blood of dead body parts? C'mon!

Kana and Ceilie background and the reasons they hate humans was pretty good and it made sense why they bonded so quickly, but I can't say the same for this princess. I'm assuming the princess is a child, provably barely 13 since you failed to give her an age. But even if I consider her a small and naive child, the plot is too forced. If her maid was already brought by one of her siblings then she wouldn't allow the kid to run away, you already painted her as naive so she would be easily coaxed to give up these plans, even talking to one of the siblings or father. And they wouldn't allow her to escape and get so close to the border. It would've been better if you made the princess smart, cunning, hateful of royalty and humans after seeing her mother murdered and the indifference of a king, after seeing how greed and uncaring the servants are, after suffering abuse and humiliation once her mother was gone, but not this naive child who can be easily manipulated and has no sense of danger sleeping through the entire night attack and explosion. There's no reason to root for her or hope she becomes non-human, no reason to want her in the party.

where's the gif from?

Please give Ceilie a non-human evolution, I'm in love with these two girls and their hate for mankind.

Here's hoping Ceilie can evolve to a non-human somehow

At first I didn't care about the party bullying Ray, but now... I wouldn't have a problem if they left him to die at the horned bear. I have a feeling he will be the one to betray them, probably trying to sell "the talking lizard"

This is super cute. I'm looking forward to her growth as a character, although it's cute what a dumb dumb she is right now, I hope she becomes smart and cunning. But more importantly I really, really hope she will talk about her past life to Lysa eventually

Yeah... this one isn't working for me. The setting and idea behind are all nice but the execution feels lacking. To me it feels like you pressed a "fast-forward" button and the story is going at 2x-4x the speed, it's so fast paced that there's barely any time to enjoy anything when it's just battle-battle-battle over and over again. Not only is every chapter a battle just to level him up, but they are also constantly filled with repeated information when he looks at his status all the time. I find myself skipping more and more paragraphs and making the already fast pace even faster, because each chapter doesn't really offer anything. And all that wouldn't be so bad if presented on an actual book, since I can buy the entire book and just read at my own pace. But for a web novel? If I had to read only a single chapter day by day as the story is being updated, this would never grab my interest, and now that I need coins and fast passes just to barely unlock a few chapters, it's not worth it against the competition. I mean even your other novels will be competing for attention against this one and they seem a lot better by comparison.

Meh, I'm not a fan of repeated characters with the excuse that they have a different skill set. Hopefully they will fuse instead of the story progressing with two kire.

Dialogue was a bit on the cringe side, especially the "breed you well". But one thing you might want to change is all the uses of "glaring" for "staring" Glaring should be used to when looking at someone angrily or fiercely.

I fail to see the points of those jewels

Cursed demonic cat of the frustrated novelist

Isn't this bad? If he can push Ervas to 5-stars in the future he will be penalized for having leveled so much before, unless the system takes into account all of his previous levelups. Otherwise his summons will always be missing stats if he doesn't make them 5stars at lv1.

Love it! I hope these two items will grow so he can change their appearance and shape anytime. Or maybe at least be able to transfer skills between items/himself.

Ohh there it is, Erva's nature. Good to know isn't a pervert focused only on waifus haha.