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... for not main characters this is harem. the only main character is still " too innocent" but mostly this is about ascension

no depth, no complexity, yes and no story line, plot armor, almighty narrator, everything only for the MC, no consequences, the world has no rules just like it doesn't look like anything and you wouldn't notice the difference between a palace and a hut.

where are you.. are you okay?

... i am simple... break the story and everything is crap. A teenager suddenly turning 18. within a year. shes 15 going to school for one year, not finishing that term and then she is turning 18. so... no.b

did you also miss him gaslighting her, raping her, always condescending her. i dont. still u leave a review Like that, like its natural to have a ceo baby.. throwing tamper tantrums and playing with peoples live. i hope you don't ever meet such a man .. it would be hard to not kill oneself.

Stockholm syndrom lead female gets bullied by baby ceo with abandonment complex for no reason oh not my gift? - temper tantrum oh i broke our agreement ? - not my fault i dont like you to know my wife, but you already working with her, so i am bot gonna tell you its my wife although you are my brother she can't be approached, but he can be all the time and she doesn't need yo know to not make it worse, but she can't have friends or work without having to have s** with him yo appease him is supposed to bear his children, but hes not even treating her anything else but like a sex toy, just splurging now and then like you do to a mistress. all other women get more thoughfull considerations like they are human but not his wife. If I don't go home to break you heart, i am not Gu Jingze

This is a shameless review for author-chan. After spending a depressing time in not finding any novels actually good enough, but calling themself gold, i am back to see how thing have developed I realised i was too stingy. Theres lot to criticize ... but its trivial. Compared to other novels there are bo major plotholes, character deviations or half assed world building. This is an improofing author. Should write novels forever. :X from a person to harsh on herself

:0 i miss your story. Hope you are healthy, and pursuing your goals. Myself goes to therapy in a few weeks. Got lots of chronic pain i now have to learn how to handle. I hope you are doing better then me, in this time we never know. I will give you another shameless review.

author, will the women just be subservients in the end? i am just asking to avoid rating this novel into the ground in the future . .. most authors minimalise subservients and write them so pitiful or with lack of character to butter up mc's ass that i am shocked and mad i wasted my life in it...

So.. you say he had morals.. the first he did was break down into a murdering, raping maniac. And you assume that people suddenly don't have morals or pride left... when deviating. That in itself makes this story worse, then what's out there. This is to all the people that think " this is reality" this is the opposite. Character Design: Well he studies arts read anime and plays games. But as soon as he got power he threw everything he desired away. story development: fast paced, no rhyme or reason, ploy holes will maybe be filled later world background: abandoned in favour of mass murder and rape Writing quality: you can read it ... its english. two stars in my book.

and did i mention the middle school English translation which makes a family a group of people ? Btw get a new translator. that you cant rate translation on here really... effed.

... well side characters without character, they are all the same besides their clothes. To be fair one is different.. but thats because he doesn't speak. well MC OP beats all 100/100 and if not certainly won't be killed, and will escape when he pleases. Worst part there is literally nothing to the environment. Like they could be living on rocks thats how well explained their environment is.. you dont get any feeling for any city or forest or mountain. they will always quickly reach their destination. There is literally no background story to anything really. a sentence or two maybe on special occasions. ... theres no interaction with the environment besides treasures falling out of it when he cuts a hole.. there nearly never anyone living nearby that could get hurt.. and in the city everyone gets saved. ... this is no game of thrones.. but neither is it anything really. its a bland, high progression novel where the OP Main literally is as naiv as can be normally.. but suddenly becomes buisness smart and calculative just by mentioning that a hes cunning so of course things go his way. overall.. if you need depth in a novel go away

giving such a low review kinda hurts me more then the author. a few plotholes, mostly good writing quality, a far too reckless MC thats way to spontaneous for her otherwise shrewdness.. and the only reason for the poor grade, one chapter a week means almost nothing gets done and i wonder how many years it will take to finish this journey. so its not unlikely author will drop it.. its sad that quality can take time and at the same time kill a story, since how to wait for it? i hope the author will develope a plot for her to follow that will outpace one or two years of chapters. i recommend this for its quality.

back to being the solid novel i know from the beginning. ok luckily we overcame the ark where every old being was too young to see Su pings strengths. and finally we are crossing towards the future. i am definitely curious about the different arcs still unfolding. like earth and Joanna.

not relatable, not realistic in any common sense.. lack of knowledge author cant even comprehend the word "loss" no scientist would see it as a loss when some not instantly finishes his work about a topic many hundred years ahead.. i dont see why i should fill my head with this ill logic, that speak bad about every other country, portraits maliciousness into their personalities/ nationality, and cant stop the novel from being plain superficial.