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Rise of Uzumaki

Rise of Uzumaki

Anime & Comics · Kaiszer

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I'm ok with him smiling in battles and fights. But out classing someone, and smiling while doing so. That's just disgusting. It's true what they say, Give someone power over another, and see how ugly his soul is...

When those words came out a smile formed on my face, and a shiver passed down everyone's spine, for those that had been under the effect of an Intimidating presence, the smile meant more than just a simple sick smile, it meant that a beast was aiming you as its prey.

My randomic road to power

My randomic road to power

Anime & Comics · DaoistKQnDFL

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Cringe. His blatant attempt of manipulating public favour and trying to justify his action, claiming its payback like some scorned lover is sickening. Be better.

" My dear Bakugo, I would have let it slide if you only shouted at me, but you attacked first, what would have happened if I had gotten hit by one of your explosions? Would I have gotten another scar? You already covered 10% of my body with them aren't you satisfied? Should I do the same to you?"

My randomic road to power

My randomic road to power

Anime & Comics · DaoistKQnDFL

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I like the magic and the background... a bit unique from other Fanfics I've read so far. The characters, they're alright... but I just don't love them. The writing? I'm fine with it. Though, the development... I don't know. I had high hopes for this, but it just seems to draw a bit too much out of me every chapter... and this latest chapters got me feeling... disgust maybe? contemp? I've lost interest in the MC. and so, I've lost interest with the novel. he's just too... weird for me. One up to the story though is the Ettens! F**king love the progression. Too bad I find this guy too weird to keep reading... the half dwarf a third human and a third House elf too, and that chick with the jewelry.

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Ugh, I don't really like the Targaryens. Can we have a dragonborn who hunts dragons in Westeros? And Essos? I've never played Skyrim before so my knowledge on dragonborns only amount to magic and weapons wielding, dragon shouting, dragon slayers...

Dragonborn after a climatic fight with the Thalmor ends up in Westeros have't decided the time yet but I'm leaning on pre-conquest and have him be the one to unite Westeros or beyond the wall before the series start.

Redoing My Life (Modern Family)

Redoing My Life (Modern Family)

TV · Illusiveone

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Ugh, another one of these protagonist who has to be the center of everything. it's these types of protagonist that I love to read about in novels where the Villain counter-attacks and suppress these stupid protagonist who think the world revolves around them.

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It was way stronger than the time he had slapped Rei. At least enough to leave a handprint in her cheek. The most surprised wasn't Saya, but her mother. She wanted to reprimand him for slapping her daughter, but when she saw his face, she couldn't do it. She recognized the emotion behind Ryo's eyes. It was the grief of loosing everything.

Evolution System in High School of The Dead

Evolution System in High School of The Dead

Anime & Comics · LastInkBender

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