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I would comment on the next sentence with nice but that would ruin the whole thing
Name: Vaan Raphna
The Witch Hunter System
Fantasy · Pointbreak
called kameo
"If you are unsure about certain terms in regards to skill, you can always consult the Elysium Compendium for more details."
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon
meanwhile over in Zander and Marco world we have some handholding going on
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My Skill Creation System
Fantasy · Herolich
police I believe are plural by themselves
Opening the doors to the police station, there were registration desks where you will report a crime and multiple desks where polices were working on their cases.
Martial Arts System
Action · Alekzi
tornado kick is most likely a butterfly kick or name different basically it is a jumping spinning crescent kick if I remember correctly
[Martial Arts Taekwondo Techniques: Sidekick, Axe Kick, Back Kick, Flying Back Kick, Crescent Kick, Inside Crescent Kick, Outside Crescent Kick, Front Kick, Jumping Front Kick, Push Kick, Knee Strike, Hook Kick, Spinning Hook Kick, Flying Sidekick, Roundhouse, Tornado Kick, Spinning Roundhouse Kick, Scissor Kick]
Martial Arts System
Action · Alekzi
I can't remember if this reference to skin man is a reference to certain race in the world or just how your describing the person
There was a black skin man, dressed in rich formal clothes with a sharp haircut who signaled Kahn to follow him. Even the receptionist here wore costly uniforms that looked no different than what would the main attendee of some royal clan would wear.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
I don't know why I read this as ban kai
"Ane..ki"
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
raining in on the parade a month late but hope you have rained in the sickness enjoying the book
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The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
soul resonance and demons umm I think I've seen this somewhere
(Whenever both of us have a strong desire toward a singular goal, our souls' combine. This is resonance.)
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
why am I getting assassin's creed vibes from this ability
In his line of sight, the plants were bright yellow in color. They could even be mistaken for gold. The plants also had numbers on them and also some weird micro symbols which Gustav couldn't understand.
The Bloodline System
Fantasy · TimVic
did they just brush their teeth and then eat pizza
By the time I was done the pizza was at my doorsteps. After enjoying the pizza and filling me to the brim, I let out a satisfying burp.
Card Apprentice Daily Log
Games · IGotStones
social distancing
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Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
Fantasy · YoanRoturier
! This is the wrong symbol to end a sentence this basically makes it seem like they are yelling their actions at us instead of just ending the sentence and starting a new one The symbol you should use would be a period instead
In the middle of the garden, Cain can see one of the workers diligently cleaning it from dead branches and leaves! As he saw Cain and the girls the man responded with a slight bow! Cain just waved his hand as a response.
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
missed is past tense and what your trying to say is missing which would be in the present time of when he saw the house
The stone path leading to the main door gave an ominous feeling with the dead tree standing close to the door, It only missed dusk and crows!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
it will stop u in your tracks
After that, he started paying more attention to his surroundings, because he now knew why certain monster hunters who had taken monster projectiles to the knee became private bodyguards.
Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
Fantasy · YoanRoturier
this really does hurt if u ever played paintball u probably have had this happen
After that, he started paying more attention to his surroundings, because he now knew why certain monster hunters who had taken monster projectiles to the knee became private bodyguards.
Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
Fantasy · YoanRoturier
Vincent used bi#ch slap it was super effective.
'Bitch Slap is strong!' Lenn and Renn thought in admiration. Not in their wildest dreams did they think a slap could incapacitate a person in one blow.
Summoned and Unwanted
Fantasy · VisualKoFey
sounds like apa
"Throw punches like this, and this, and this. Then finish with a deadly elbow. Just to be sure, throw an uppercut straight at the chin."
Summoned and Unwanted
Fantasy · VisualKoFey
if this was a fire from a battery that wouldn't work because it is a chemical fire but hey what ever this is a fantasy world
Vincent drowned the fire with water while Lupa took her clothes off and became a white wolf. After putting things to take with them, Vincent pulled the cart with Ester and Lupa resting inside.
Summoned and Unwanted
Fantasy · VisualKoFey
you have been spelling Nobel for noble Nobel peace award is different than a noble just thought I would let the author know been a good book so far
"We should not take this simply and give it to a greedy nobel," Daphnia was really happy about this.
True King's Ecstasy
Fantasy · ElectricLuna