HeraNicole

Slightly disappointed in some sections, but overall a beautiful ending. I like these kind of villainess romance stories and you seem to provide them. I do think you could go back and fix the grammar mistakes and pronoun problems, but otherwise I enjoyed it.

I really enjoyed what has been written so far. I cannot wait to read more chapters from you. I have far to many questions about the nature of the game, the odd dungeon, quests, and everything happening in the story. I will keep an eye on this!