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This LN has many strong points: - Well made world building. - Fascinating power system. - Thrilling and grounded plot. - Well designed and fleshed characters. - Properly excecuted plot twists. - Good use of major powers to change the tides of events instead of the commonly forced plot armor / Deus ex machina. in terms of LN quality, Lord kf the mysteries reach a high level thanks to the high degree of the argument and the creativity of the author to give form to the fantastical elements in a grim and thrilling context that combine the usual class sustem power with the cosmic horror genre, and the well written cheracters and the wau they develop in this fantastic world make it a great reading experience, I can blindly recommend this LN for anyone with decent standards. However!, it has some weak points as well that can't bee overlook: - Sometimes, the MC is cringe, you can really tell that there are a few moments that are way too cringe, and I don't like to use this word, but is the most appropriate to describe the feeling. - The author overuse some words or reference every once in a while during the length of am arc, take for example, since the chapter 1000+, he had been using "On the one gand [this]... On the other hand [that]....", and used it almost every two chapters, getting me really annoyed. and that's why, I give 5 starts to all score except writing quality, grammatical consistency is important for a proper immersion in lecture and poor writing will damage the quality of the work, regardless of the good quality of the content.

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Er Mu has return with a new work that reserves a good score, this slow perspective that give us starting from small and standing on the world background was a great introduction, similar to his previous work, we see a peculiar MC who is making use of his knowledge on science to make the best use of the power system of the world. This MC has a limited access to knowledge and what the info of the world is explained smoothly instead of info dumping us about the powers and monsters, in this world, pther than cultivators there are the called Mystics, they use a spell based power system to subdue creatures called demond, fiends amd gosths. There are a wide range of these creatures, and many demons are not maneating monster but smart animals that live their own way, but unfortunately the human greed and ignorance have no bounds, all creatures that can be labeled as different from human or animal are target of fear and discrimination, mystic kills and take the territories of these demons and force them to live in seclusion, but our MC, who comes from a world were the demons, who can take himan shape with animal traits, are part of the popular media, so his interactions with this race might be able to mark a difference, although is too early to know if he will be able to properly influence the council, whose power is great and their authority "unquestionable". overall a great work, needs to be polished over grammar though.

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This novel is great, but dude, this translation, it takes me back again and again lol.

The cooling watermelon juice squirted inside her mouth all at once, attacking her little taste buds. 

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