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Honestly that's really good. I've seen a few other diary stories and they drag on and on and on because like 75% of chapters are just the diary entries talking about stuff we know from the canon timeline, then like multiple chapters of the 'diary readers' reacting to the things in the diary. There is a One Piece diary story being translated on here that is like that. It has 90 chapters so far and almost nothing has happened.

Harems are a crutch for sub-par authors who don't know how to write decent male/female friendships. Like they can't decide what men and woman talk about in a friendship other than being together so just make it a harem to get past all that. Like the Bechdel test, where it's hard to find a book/movie where two women have a single conversation that isn't about men or relationships.

Oh look, it's a retard out in the wild. Poor thing only has the one brain cell working.

Be careful, The Ginger hangs out with Boots and they've 'allegedly' done some weird stuff with an ostrich...

Is he getting a farfetch'd so it can become a sirfetche'd? It would fit perfect. Or a pawniard, ralts, or honedge to get bisharp, gallade, or aegislash.

I believe the author of DxD has actually kinda 'retconned' and now the boost just gives an actual boost mostly. The first few boosts probably still double, because the whole point of it is to increase power, and the first few boosts give the most since he is starting at his base. Also, Issie wouldn't have been a planet buster or whatever because you can only boost up to the limit of your body. He'd just die if he tried to go further like past users of the gear have died of overuse.

In all honesty it is less about Tonikawa, and more to do with the group chat. Group Chat means that it will cross fandoms and have lots of characters involved. I have never even heard of this manga/anime before I started reading, simply because I saw "Dimensional Chat Group". So you should probably get started on the actual group chat before people lose interest because you're a ways into the story now.

There are lots of generational talents that appear like Mihawk and Shanks. However Yoriichi is one of those rare world making talents that help define a whole setting. Like Merlin in Fate. Or the past Joy Boy in OP. If he were in OP standards he would be peak strength like Xebec who fought Garp and Roger together.

He needs a treadmill so he doesn't have to go out. Create an alchemy one maybe.

If you REALLY try, the human body in DxD can also be OP. Vasco is stated to be 87 in DxD which starts in roughly 2008 as is the publication date. Meaning Vasco was somewhere around 18-23 when he showed Kokabiel why he was nicknamed the Violence of Heaven. He wasn't even peak yet and hadn't been training all that long comparatively.

I would but man, you either need to speed up or write more in a chapter. You haven't been in like the top 50, let alone top 10 for a few months probably. It takes WAY to long for anything to happen in your story. I stopped reading like 2 months ago to let stuff stack up and he's still in freakin Impel Down and nothing has happened basically. You write really well but you drag things on and on and on. I'm sure a lot of people do the same thing of letting chapters stack up which is why you get so few votes daily. Since people only read it once every month or two.

Tobirama could place a finger on the ground and sense someone hundreds of miles away and tell who they are from the feel of their chakra. Even tell if they have a bloodline if he was familiar with it.

Yeah, no. One director has a couple of good movies, and while he has 2 movies I consider in the top 10 of all time, half of the credit for his success goes to Clint Eastwood and not him being non-American.

Author is adding his own AU bits to the story. The only pieces in the mortal world are his 'nails' which are just the small pieces of his soul in random humans. 'Nails' are what make fullbringers and removed they were made into the Hogyoku.

The incident with Shiba and the white hollow hasn't happened yet, right? So there should be 5 noble houses because the Shiba are still barely hanging in there and aren't completely 'disgraced' until then I think.

Yeah a pistol shrimp would be great here. And it's seafood so wouldn't even taste bad.

Most of those quirks are still completely useless and could be done faster by someone just walking over and doing it. Like Izuku's mom. She can attract small objects...slowly. I could grab and move two objects with two hands at a faster speed. His dad can breathe fire but probably gets tired quickly and could be replaced with a lighter or a welder.

If his strength is conceptual enough to break Lev's healing then it could be conceptual enough to hold as well. Punching and grabbing are both strength based. So grabbing/holding Olga so she can't disappear would be reasonable.