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Invincible System start from One Piece · C3
Quidanstealsnovels: Well i gave it a go and its exactly like I figured.
Pointless fantsy self insert, stupid unbalanced system that completely upsets and power balance in the world in a few chapters.
Generic 'harem' setting that has little to no actually development of a relationship and is just 'he's so strong, rich, cool etc... lets just fall for him instantly'.
No character depth, no character development.
The grammar is horrible, there is so many mistakes everywhere I had to reread entire sentences multiple times because they barely make sense.
Oh and its one of those multiple worlds type ones so don't expect any good story, meaningful side characters etc... because the MC will just go into another world to destroy that eventually. There has never been a multiple world hopper fanfic that is any good. Ever.
So yeah if you're one of the few rare readers who hope to find a nice quality fanfic here and do actually enjoy anime/ manga adaptions if they're done well. This isn't for you. Low quality.
Of couse this won't stop the huge amount of fake reviews, the idiots who get excited over harem etc...
In fact I wonder if the author will delete this review out of spite, they usually do. Someone copy and paste and save it.Invincible System start from One Piece
What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes? · C72
PrinceOfNilfheim: He doesn't have anything interesting ? Again, stupid. You have just forgone the majority of my reply which was showcasing xhat is truly interesting about the MC, to say that he's not interesting, without any proof.
Now, about the realm of destruction, while it is true that it is important, but I wouldnt go as far as saying it's what defines the MC, I can think of so many novels, where their defining quality, only comes into play at least halfway into the story. Now, I'm gonna go at you personnaly because right after you say "don't tell me to read past chapter 100" You go on to tell me to read another novel (Which I already checked out, and dropped it into the first 20 chapters) so please, next time you use your twisted common sense, make sure you go by it tooParagon of Destruction
assassinsking: he really needed a solid setback before the cockiness got the better of him...Profane Prince of Domination · C303
SheepMeUp: Well, 4.1 is overrated, mostly via Rating bots :(.
From what I've seen, the author is from spain and writes in spanish and has little to zero english knowledge. His chapters are machine translated and some early and late ones are edited by another one with a little more english skills.
Like most pseudo p*rn authors, the 18+ chapters are written by a virgin who gathered experience by watching po*n. Null Imagination, null seduction.
MC gathers his harem members only by being strong. There is zero affection or romance.
MC is also an irresponsible asshole. He is about 10 years away from home. Because of circumstances he was unable to return. His parents and brother are worried sick. But MC's thoughts about that are: I've sent them enough Money, they should be happy. So even when he returned, he let his family wait for anothersome weeks just to chase some more skirts.
The MC starts as a likeable person with overly responsible behaviour and transforms with time into a typical chinese xianxia asshole MC that is meaninglessly arrogant and kills everyone he doesn't like.
It is rather sad to see a Story, that started so promising only with bad grammar and is now at a point with relatively good grammar but shi*ty plot :(
The characters have no noticeable personality. Girls see the MC and love him, boys admire or hate him - whatever is better for the plot. But there is nothing special about anyone. If one or two of his wives die, because the author forgets about them, you probably wouldn't even realize it.
Writing Quality **
Stability of Updates *****
Story Development **
Character Design **
World Background ****
average ***A new life in High School DXD
Crimson138: So to you basic manners is treating women you dont have a relationship with like a girlfriend its not like he did anything rude to her dont try to act as if he slapped her and told her to know her place or somethingSpirit Cultivation · C20
Crimson138: What common sense its not like they are a couple yet you just don't have basic reading comprehensionSpirit Cultivation · C20
Profane Prince of Domination · C267
Crimson138: Can you stop white knighting nobody is gonna **** you for thatSpirit Cultivation · C20
Profane Prince of Domination · C260
Oniichan_Thickskin: the so call "review" is pretty bias against Pokemon, I think this guy just do it for the attention, honestly I wish there's an option to just disable all reviews and rating, just using the powerstone voting system is fine.Journey Towards Greatness
TDI: I believe there is a difference for some people between people and their own bloodMaster of Time · C11
Profane Prince of Domination · C225
_Felix_: XD Klee so true also where is your pfp from?· C21
Senior_Nepuko: brother, did you actually read the chapter :/ ?Spirit Cultivation · C20
When an Immortal Emperor enters a Cultivation Chat Group · C16
When an Immortal Emperor enters a Cultivation Chat Group · C12
Raze_: I like the comedyWhen an Immortal Emperor enters a Cultivation Chat Group · C7
Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C2
Erosire: Yup pretty much. Did you actually read the story properly or skipping through chunks of text?
He has no problem with mass genocide. He kills ppl without batting an eye. Did stuffs for fun even though there are alot better methods like bringing Atlantis to from before anyone settle on it. Nope. He rather sees people fighting each other and killing each others.
If he does everything like a cold logical robot then this story will be boring. It will also filled with self doubts, which is fucking annoying.
The only thing that pulls his heart string is his family. His blood not someone who give birth to his children. He doesnt even love her in the beginning so why you keep trying to make an argument out of that o.O
Also, check the story summary and tag again to know what you are going to ne in for. Huh.Master of Time · C11
Erosire: I dont accept that definition.
MC doesnt care about her as he already condemned her for what she will do. I dont want to debate the morality of that.
MC only revisit her due to an oversight. Although he could undo what he did, he choose to keep the baby despite it is not in his best interest to do so. This is just his characterization.
If he is a true calculating bastard. He could reverse her time and then leave. No need to give her a chance or let the baby live. But MC isnt like that.
Cold and ruthless but also human. There are lines he is not willing to cross. Like erasing an innocent child from existence, especially if that child is his daughter.
Hmmmm...Master of Time · C11
Erosire: Who said she is his wife? She is the mother of his daughter not his wife. Not really sure who will be his wife since his adventure is through time and space ;)Master of Time · C11
Master of Time · C11
GreatSage_Master1: He is too lazy to waste any energy in the rabbit! But he can´t withstand to much so his facade would be revealed.The Hunter Academy · C16
Serpent of the Chat Group · C1
DarkDesire: You got plenty of points wrong here. MC never had feelings for the maid, the previous body had. No reason to follow through. Plus what he does is truly not her concern. She couldn't even save the previous body from death while he was killed right in front of her.Spirit Cultivation · C20
Wyatterp1: stop biching let the author write how he wants if you don't like it don't read it or go write your own storyDeleted_ · C0
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