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dude.. you're excluding the father and mother in the family. seriously a big reveal for no good reason or twist. it could be done better.. and btw hating it is nothing to do with being revealed but how it is done..

Also, I'd seriously want to ask one thing. This scene was inspired by the anime, 'Ascendance of a bookworm', no one in the anime community hated that scene then why here? If you know then tell me in the comments of this paragraph, if it's something I can improve without changing the plot then I will.

Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

Fantasy · moon_senpai

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what balance?
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lol dex for movement speed... what kind of archer is this?
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*breathlessness sound effect*

Hey, it's me. Do you guys know better ways to express breathlessness than huff? I couldn't think of something better right now, but if I find something I will change it.

Mob Without System In Naruto World

Mob Without System In Naruto World

Anime & Comics · Yukki_Sensei

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