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I like system novel so I dive in. The Story so far seems the combining of Japanese Isekai summoned heroes with Beta/wimpy MC and A Chinese reincarnation cultivation novel with brainless arrogant young masters. The premises look good and the world building is quite interesting. Now for the con : - While the MC is growing, until the last chapter that I read, he still couldn't get rid his looser mentality. It's remind me why I dislike Japanese Isekai wimpy beta MC. I don't mind weak and dumb MC but not if the mind/spirit is weak as well. - Young master trope seems not implement properly hence all their acts looks dumb. In a kingdom setting with the ruller is absolute power, not even a prime minister would dare to start giving crap to any person who walking alongside the niece of the King in public let alone a random young master. People from other kingdom might be willing to do that but it doesn't make sense for the citizen of the Kingdom. I think the novel got to much influence from Chinese webnovel. Even without knowing that MC is actually strong, MC's backer whom everyone know (King and the Dean) should be deterrence.enough for people to not dare to disrespect him in public hence the act of the young masters, their teachers and also the grandkids of that Minister of war is really stupid. .Educated children will not disrespect the guest of their powerful Minister of war grandpa, and mere teacher will not try to kill a student of the dean who able and willing to kill easily, in front of him. Common sense said that the setting could only work if MC don't have a Dean as a teacher and King as a backer. Imagine a manager dare to slap a CEO's child who also a nephew of the chairman in public, over a dispute with his own child. IMHO, magical realism with Western setting shouldn't include the cultivation thing and whatnot but I know everyone have their own taste. Lastly, while it's not perfect, "Spare me great Lord" manage to pull the reluctant reincarnation setting without making the MC looks like a bipolar kid. Hopefully this one can do it as well.

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