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oh your right. different people different mind set. even if they know things like that happens, specially in world with magic, lords and slave. they will question everything that does not go their way. tnx for the replys. good luck with your novel. ๐๐๐
โฆI knew I was kidnapped, or something like thatโฆbut they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, rightโฆ? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this inโฆHe thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy ยท DelzGB
and that is what im pointing at. the stupidity of the mc. VR or not that is his reality now. i think you wrote the mc as a double standard person. when his fine and happy no question ask, but problems and danger this VR should not be like this. its a good idea and story by the way. ๐๐๐
โฆI knew I was kidnapped, or something like thatโฆbut they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, rightโฆ? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this inโฆHe thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy ยท DelzGB
i'm pointing at the fact, vr or not, npc or not, that is the mc's reality. death is death. its his only reality now. can he return to his past life, i think its not mentioned. so what ever the npc do that his reality. he should have accepted that fact long ago. the way you wrote this he even love his parents now.
โฆI knew I was kidnapped, or something like thatโฆbut they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, rightโฆ? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this inโฆHe thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy ยท DelzGB
there is a warning, death is true death. anyone with a brain will think its not a game when your life is on the line.
โฆI knew I was kidnapped, or something like thatโฆbut they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, rightโฆ? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this inโฆHe thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy ยท DelzGB
its your fault his late.๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด๐ด
Suddenly, she heard screams, loud wails of pain and agony. She turned to look in the direction where the sound came from and mumbled, "Took you long enough."ย
Ace Of Terrans
Sci-fi ยท THE_WORDSMITH
if it is a girl, mouth to mouth. if boy just pour. ๐๐๐
He quickly grabbed the satchel and quickly took out the bottle of grape juice. Then he forced open the old man's mouth and poured the juice into his mouth.
God-tier Farm
Urban ยท Gentleness In A Steel Gun
then why is the girl chose to pass there. its like thats the only way. ๐๐๐๐
This place was remote and it was rare for people to pass by. It was also because of this that the three hoodlums dared to act so brazenly under the influence of alcohol.
God-tier Farm
Urban ยท Gentleness In A Steel Gun
is trying killing your ally not evil enough? he left him to die.
- Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Rise Of The Hoarder
Fantasy ยท Magecrafter
an space travel, grow fast, become super human and yet acne is still a problem? ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฒ
Ibanez got hit hard by the effects of puberty, still showing heavy acne on his face even in his senior year. He also grew to nearly the top of the Pilot Uniform sizing options, leaving him in fear that he'd be dropped from the program as unsuitable because of his size. Fortunately at 194cm he just made the cutoff, even if it was a tight fit inside the cockpit of the light and agile Corvette Class Mecha.
Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
Sci-fi ยท Aoki_Aku
i think its memory sharing, she can read memories maybe she can send info to him on how to do things. maybe in future he can read her mind and memories. ๐๐๐๐
We began with the techniques. She asked me to repeat each technique ten times in a row without a mistake, which I was surprised that I was able to do. It was actually becoming easier each time and some actions almost happened without me even needing to do anything.
Aether Beasts
Fantasy ยท I_S_Rift
your the dumb one, dumbass
Qin Chuan's blade missed, and the chopping board suddenly broke into pieces.
Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class
Eastern ยท Evolution of Ten Updating Beasts
where is the fire ball spell and yet the spell was used twice ๐ง๐ง๐ง ๐๐๐๐
[ abilities: Healing Spell Level 2, Ice Crystal Spell Level 2, Spike Spike Level 3, Energy Shield Level 2]
Territorial Ruler: The Plants I Planted Are Alive!
Fantasy ยท Floating Morals
all this bs, his a cultivator but cant hold a fish down? ๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก
Qin Chuan's blade missed, and the chopping board suddenly broke into pieces.
Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class
Eastern ยท Evolution of Ten Updating Beasts
the question is what happened to the attacker. he should be banned to any sports and the family should pay for the damaged done and give lifetime financial support to the victim. ๐๐๐
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The Adventurer System
Games ยท Jigx
it could be alot easier if he mecha rise the things around him, not mentioned how many times he can use it. why not mecha rise the tree stump, the whole tree if possible. ๐ง๐ง๐ง
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Destroy, Eliminate, Exist and Persevere
Fantasy ยท Moloxiv
he only killed 3 people and now he is being targeted, MC's enemy killed alot but still free. Money talks ๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง
"Even though we might not be able to stop them, we'll do our best."
I Can Create Perfect Accidents.
Urban ยท Comfortably Trippy
how can he not get caught? he is literally saying it to his victim that he is doing it to them? they can hire someone to get back at you. ๐๐๐
He quickly thought of a countermeasure and thought: "I have to become stronger as soon as possible. I can't always rely on my ability to foresee things. That way, one day, I'll have a chance to fight against this Foresee ability."
I Can Create Perfect Accidents.
Urban ยท Comfortably Trippy
sitaw ๐๐๐
Shi Tao.
Ace Of Terrans
Sci-fi ยท THE_WORDSMITH