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I'm still reading the story as of now( time of writing) I honestly feel this story is good and I understand what you are trying to tell in the story. it's just that it's written too straight forward.( it's bland sorry I don't know what words I should use) I mean like . he s op that's it. he is the master of the guardian of emblems and that's it. no character building whatsoever. but i honestly like your idea and the story u want to build. Well good luck I'll still read it until the latest chap. thanks! **. pls don't take my comment as a derogative way of criticism . i like the world and character you want to build in this story it's just that it's too straight forward.

he have a servant who is the guardian of the emblems spirit yet he dont have one. and the stupid guardian didn't dare to atleast teach him how to use powers on that world. also stupid mc 89 plus 5 years old geezer but can't think rational. I mean yeah he was 89 yrs old from earth and live 5 yrs at his current world but leaned nothing about anything?I mean if the emblems felt that they were not worthy atleast mc could ask how to use his unlimited mp from the guardian. Well I'll read a bit more further see how it goes when he actually learned how to use his powers..