BlackStarLine

4mth

Commented

So is the personality change going to be permanent or is it going to smooth out a little over time?

ch 28 Eterna City

Pokémon: Journey towards dreams

Anime & Comics · AnAccountant

BlackStarLine

7mth

Commented

A pity. Do you post this anywhere else or just on WN?

ch 172 I am done...

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

BlackStarLine

1yr

Commented

This was hilarious, well done author.

ch 548 Emilia Tortures Lith

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

BlackStarLine

1yr

Commented

Rin is best girl. Though she maybe arrogant and a little petty, she is still best girl hands down.

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BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

So the GAR goes nowhere near Egypt then? Seems a little odd that a nation like Egot doesn’t get a mention…

ch 423 423. World Famous Magnus

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

So I assume you have some sort of plan to cure Magnus’ infertility? Or is it just Magnus assuming he is infeerily due to what Merlin and Arthur assume?

ch 352 352. Feelings

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

This chapter was so confusing with you describing Ajuka as male and female at differeby times

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BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

You still need to watch your pronouns, you’re consistently mixing up he/she and him/his/her/hers. You should look I to getting an editor or beta reader who has a good grasp of the English language to help

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BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

As a note, with Scathach, you keep using make pronouns, despite being female.

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BlackStarLine

2yr

Commented

Sorry, but Sev is an idiot in this case. Who is the one person ye can turn to to help him? Magnus. And yet, he doesnt bother with asking for help and just goe….

ch 244 244. Plot Thickens