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On the Slytherin side, Malfoy's scowl could have curdled milk. He jabbed his wand aggressively, but only managed to send his inkwell flying across the room, splattering Crabbe with emerald ink.

HP: The Sorcerer Supreme

Movies · LORD_ASHURA_

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An advice for you author - get a proofreader/ beta reader who can fix all the grammatical and name errors you have made throughout the story and also add double inverted commas "" anytime someone talks and single ones'' when they think. This will really improve the quality of the story and not make it look like a diary entry anymore. When this happens, many more people will be willing to subscribe to your pátrëôñ.

I try to be a fair author and always publish works quickly, not leave them only for those who are subscribed to me on patreon, (I know how unpleasant it is, I read a lot too) but I would like to have more people there, that would give me more motivation to write for you in this difficult time.

I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat

Anime & Comics · FanFictionForge

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Replied to Clay_Champion

Hmmm, i think the official translation would be omen. Ultra instinct omen is what it should be called.

"My God!! It's Ultra Instinct – Sign??" Goten exclaimed excitedly.

Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign

Anime & Comics · Clay_Champion

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Honestly, instead of cheating, why can't she just break up with Reed? The guy has been neglecting her which warrants the breakup but cheating is a bit much i think.....

My eyes went toward the door and I could see Wanda peeking inside through that small glass window on the top part of the door.

Spider-Man 0X

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

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Replied to DatBoiEraser

Anything in moderation is fine. You use it too often, like it you read any other novels then you probably won't find this style used as it breaks immersion. Also, thoughts cannot have hesitation. There can be doubts and there can be multiple thoughts but hesitating in thinking something is just not valid. I would even suggest to fully stop this way to show hesitating and instead use words like 'But, maybe' to show it in thoughts

ch 17 Chapter 17: The Huntress

DXD Issei: The Mind of Games

Anime & Comics · DatBoiEraser

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I really hate the use of.....every......fûçkíng.....where ......it ......really......breaks......immersion. Get my point? So, please author fix your chapters.

ch 17 Chapter 17: The Huntress

DXD Issei: The Mind of Games

Anime & Comics · DatBoiEraser

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Bro are you in Bangalore? That sounds like the current bangalore situation from last 1-2 days😂

AN: Sorry, but no chapter tomorrow. Got a message from our electric supply office, they will be cutting some trees and fix electric polls around the area[fuckers doing this after the storm passed and trees fell on the line], so, no electricity for the entire day. Damn, after over 24 hrs of no electricity, again another day without electricity.

Spider-Man 0X

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

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Replied to TrashyWriter01

Hmmm, a suggestion for you. Put up a good cover and get it to 15k words fast or make a fake 15k chapter to get people to read it.

Naoya is now the head of the Zenin clan.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt [Completed]

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

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And Tang San looked at the other party's distant figure and thought to himself, "Dragons don't live with snakes? That's why true dragons have become an endangered species on the Douluo Continent. There are very few with pure bloodlines. Only the crossbred ones have survived."