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ch 94 Akira Toriyama - Sayonara
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
was he raised as a child soldier? if so, his morals should be more skewed than acting like a regular teenager. this scene comes off as her manipulating him more than giving advice. he is acting like a normal teen and not a soldier or assassin in this chapter.
ch 0 6 Fanboying, and then almost crying
Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
yes you are! I don't know how you found me and entered my home but someone help!
Please calm down about this. If you think my approach is wrong please go read the original book and enjoy. No one is forcibly holding you down or forcing you to read it.
Movies · The_last_airbender
the chapter feels out of place since Grim is on a case but then pov switches and leaves you hanging about what's going on with Grim and Jessica.
ch 47 Chapter 42: Mama needs her Froyo!!!
Anime & Comics · samadomkv
system of a down reference?
She looked me dead in the eye, serious as Fudge's funeral bell, "The revolution will — in fact — be televised."
Book&Literature · Daddy
I'd fail that class.
"Oh…" Septima's cheeks flushed with color. Was it something I said? "Suddenly I'm reminded why you are… were… my favorite student."
Book&Literature · Daddy
it's fun watching him interact with both women. they honestly have good chemistry together. wonder what happened to squirrel girl? not that I like the character just curious why she stood him up.
ch 46 Chapter 41: Human Trash, Skia..Skia, Human Trash!
Anime & Comics · samadomkv
he just made fun of her and then calls out his attack name lol.
He declared, "Star Swordsmanship·Shigure-Soen-Ryu·8th form: Akisame!"
Anime & Comics · Tom_22
thanks for coming back. I enjoy this story since so far it isn't some edge lord mc. if the tone stays like this I would be a happy man. but I also know this is worm so it could flip on its head at any moment. keep up the good work.
ch 0 9 Interlude 1.b
Book&Literature · PrinceOfNilfheim
nuzlocke the bane of all pokemon players existence lol.
"How are you guys?" I greeted them and they nodded, while Jasper just stayed silent. I know that he's in Hardcore Survival Nuzlocke mode right now.
Movies · Mas_W
Merry Christmas!
A/N: Merry Christmas to all my readers. Well those who celebrate it at least. To the rest simply happy holidays.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Merry Christmas! glad your back.
Additionally, I wish you a Merry Christmas.
Anime & Comics · Maerry
just a suggestion but splitting up the dialogue would make this easier to read. I'm reading on my phone so that may be why but right now it just looks like a couple of long paragraphs with some dialogue in the middle of them.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1 Spartan Dark 909
Video Games · LuciferDark
just a suggestion but I would shorten this to konaha instead of the full name. makes it a little easier on you.
"Father will go with us tomorrow. Father asked me to tell you not to be late, otherwise he will personally carry your bed to the door of the ninja academy, letting you experience what it feels like to sleep in front of everyone in Konohagakure Village."
Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu
this chapter was good. all I can think about is him yelling "It's so FLUFFY!" while swinging the lion around lol
ch 0 5 Simulated... Combat (Not)
Anime & Comics · Bleap
cool, was just confused. thanks for answering
ch 25 The Betrayal of Hermione
Book&Literature · Monk_of_Souls
this chapter is really jumbled together, with how the dialogue is all in the same paragraph. if you separate the dialogue into individual paragraphs it would make it so much easier to read.
ch 0 8 Family time
Friendly Neighborhood Youtuber Spider-man
Movies · KamBroFam123ERT