I disagree. Ronin were more like bandit leaders. Steel was scarce in Japan, so a Ronin with a steel sword was a big deal, peasants with iron weapons were not. A group of ronin was a legitimate threat to the sovereignty of feudal lords, a single ronin was a potential armsmen and thus a valuable recruit to be courted.
The people in Kyoto have begun to call me, The Lone Ronin
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
the imperium undergone-> the imperium had undergone / the imperium underwent
The government also became heavily centralized with the help of technologies. The Imperium undergone a brief period of culture shock with the rapid rediscovery and creation of technologies but was also quick to adjust their lifestyle.
Anime & Comics · SomeGuyOnDarkArmor
speaking of arthurian legends I hope we see a lady of the lake cameo
Though I try my best to help by allowing the victims and fearful subjects asylum in my kingdom.
Book&Literature · AfricanProdigy14
She's the goddess of hearth and home. civilization is just one big home we all live in. seems to me she's the only one with a decent idea.
Hestia wrapped herself in her plain brown shall. "I still think we should make peace", she says.
Book&Literature · AfricanProdigy14
he even emphasized the difference to imply his surprise
Third, I have pale sea blue eyes. Yup, sea blue.
Book&Literature · AfricanProdigy14
DNA analysis doesn't exist yet
Something good came out of it though I managed to rummage through some S.S.R files and I could confirm my parents were apart of it.
TV · flowing_lightning
I woke up to find myself in a dark space. I couldn't hear or see anything, and it felt like I was in a pool of fluid. It was a strangely comfortable experience, but it was a short lived feeling and my comfortable world began to tremble as I felt myself pulled towards a light. Regardless of how hard I struggled it was futile. I tried to spruce it up a little so you've got an example. hope this helps with your pronoun questions!
I woke up to find myself in a dark space, I couldn't hear or see anything, I felt like I was in a pool of fluid and weirdly I felt comfortable but that feeling of comfort was short lived . My comfortable world began to tremble and I felt myself being pulled towards a light and no matter how hard I struggled it was useless.
TV · flowing_lightning
in most places you can substitute another pronoun such as "it" example: I felt like I was in a pool -> It felt like I was in a pool.
I woke up to find myself in a dark space, I couldn't hear or see anything, I felt like I was in a pool of fluid and weirdly I felt comfortable but that feeling of comfort was short lived . My comfortable world began to tremble and I felt myself being pulled towards a light and no matter how hard I struggled it was useless.
TV · flowing_lightning
or exposition
"It seems we have someone with a big name indeed for this boy to react like that. I expect some expansion, Krilon." The woman said.
Video Games · El_Don
Sirius and Peter lying still unconscious on the floor -> sirius and peter still lying unconscious on the ground / sirius and peter lying still and unconscious on the ground they're outdoors in a garden so itd be the ground not the floor
This paragraph has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
they all position themselves around / they all position themselves surrounding
This paragraph has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
a few seconds later -> a few moments later / shortly after / a moment later
This paragraph has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
second not seconds
This paragraph has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
I'll start posting more corrections for you! Always feel like I might dishearten authors, seeing your appreciation makes me feel better about it!
This paragraph has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
unless they fuse the ends of multiple tables together; could use magic to do it but there are mundane methods for the same thing. if you're interested look up wood joinery some of the methods are pretty fascinating. especially if you enjoy geometric puzzles.
This chapter has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
just keep a bezoar in your pocket to suck on when you get too buzzed
This chapter has been deleted.
TV · Galeitynd
seeming more and more like Dumbledore mind raped him
They seemed to agree but without enthusiasm. I don't know what prompted me to issue such an offer.
Movies · HPMan
noticed this both times too. probably some kinda lemur or canopy dweller.
Sighing Bruce began the description of the cell combination, "The human they chose, which just happens to be the werewolf, Ivo's cells which bonded with the werewolf cells almost perfectly but became unstable after a short time, followed by ape cells from four different types; gorilla, monkey, baboon, and orangutan, these were used to settle the Ivo and werewolf cells. Plus…" Bruce froze when he got to the last two cell types used in the experiment.
SPARTAN Saiyan In DC
Anime & Comics · CultivatorDragon