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thethomas

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my name is thomas.

2018-06-27 Joined Global

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Replied to Blackguystuff

noticed this both times too. probably some kinda lemur or canopy dweller.

Sighing Bruce began the description of the cell combination, "The human they chose, which just happens to be the werewolf, Ivo's cells which bonded with the werewolf cells almost perfectly but became unstable after a short time, followed by ape cells from four different types; gorilla, monkey, baboon, and orangutan, these were used to settle the Ivo and werewolf cells. Plus…" Bruce froze when he got to the last two cell types used in the experiment.

SPARTAN Saiyan In DC

SPARTAN Saiyan In DC

Anime & Comics · CultivatorDragon

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the imperium undergone-> the imperium had undergone / the imperium underwent

The government also became heavily centralized with the help of technologies. The Imperium undergone a brief period of culture shock with the rapid rediscovery and creation of technologies but was also quick to adjust their lifestyle.

I am the God-Emperor of Mankind!

I am the God-Emperor of Mankind!

Anime & Comics · SomeGuyOnDarkArmor

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speaking of arthurian legends I hope we see a lady of the lake cameo

Though I try my best to help by allowing the victims and fearful subjects asylum in my kingdom.

Reincarnated as Poseidon

Reincarnated as Poseidon

Book&Literature · AfricanProdigy14

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Replied to WolfLord

DNA analysis doesn't exist yet

Something good came out of it though I managed to rummage through some S.S.R files and I could confirm my parents were apart of it.

Batman in MCU

Batman in MCU

TV · flowing_lightning

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I woke up to find myself in a dark space. I couldn't hear or see anything, and it felt like I was in a pool of fluid. It was a strangely comfortable experience, but it was a short lived feeling and my comfortable world began to tremble as I felt myself pulled towards a light. Regardless of how hard I struggled it was futile. I tried to spruce it up a little so you've got an example. hope this helps with your pronoun questions!

I woke up to find myself in a dark space, I couldn't hear or see anything, I felt like I was in a pool of fluid and weirdly I felt comfortable but that feeling of comfort was short lived . My comfortable world began to tremble and I felt myself being pulled towards a light and no matter how hard I struggled it was useless.

Batman in MCU

Batman in MCU

TV · flowing_lightning

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Commented

in most places you can substitute another pronoun such as "it" example: I felt like I was in a pool -> It felt like I was in a pool.

I woke up to find myself in a dark space, I couldn't hear or see anything, I felt like I was in a pool of fluid and weirdly I felt comfortable but that feeling of comfort was short lived . My comfortable world began to tremble and I felt myself being pulled towards a light and no matter how hard I struggled it was useless.

Batman in MCU

Batman in MCU

TV · flowing_lightning

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Replied to Samien

or exposition

"It seems we have someone with a big name indeed for this boy to react like that. I expect some expansion, Krilon." The woman said.

Dragonborn Saga

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

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Sirius and Peter lying still unconscious on the floor -> sirius and peter still lying unconscious on the ground / sirius and peter lying still and unconscious on the ground they're outdoors in a garden so itd be the ground not the floor

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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they all position themselves around / they all position themselves surrounding

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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a few seconds later -> a few moments later / shortly after / a moment later

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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second not seconds

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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I'll start posting more corrections for you! Always feel like I might dishearten authors, seeing your appreciation makes me feel better about it!

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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Replied to justin_philipie

unless they fuse the ends of multiple tables together; could use magic to do it but there are mundane methods for the same thing. if you're interested look up wood joinery some of the methods are pretty fascinating. especially if you enjoy geometric puzzles.

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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just keep a bezoar in your pocket to suck on when you get too buzzed

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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punny

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Wizard Diaries : New Blood

Wizard Diaries : New Blood

TV · Galeitynd

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seeming more and more like Dumbledore mind raped him

They seemed to agree but without enthusiasm. I don't know what prompted me to issue such an offer.

Harry Potter: New World

Harry Potter: New World

Movies · HPMan

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