Zwt1995

Zwt1995

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where is this books chapter in comparison to ff. I read your entire upload there but the names are different and this seems a few behind.

ch 75 Harry Potter : Chapter 74: New Addition III

Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid

Book&Literature · Demonun

Zwt1995

2mth

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where is this book in comparison to the ff.com version?

ch 74 Harry Potter : Chapter 73: New Addition II

Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid

Book&Literature · Demonun

Zwt1995

5mth

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"little bit" instead of "little but"

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Star Wars: The Yautja

Anime & Comics · ForestOfDarkness

Zwt1995

10mth

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l.m,. m. .m... m m..........lp...l..

ch 48 Chapter: 48

Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.

The Legendary Junkmaster

Fantasy · Antihero

Zwt1995

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I was truly blown away by this story and read up to chapter 660 within 4 days in a binge session. The storyline, background, and magic development are all great. There are the occasional issue with grammar, however that may just be the differences due to translations. The only large issue that I noticed (which tends to happen in some of these larger novels) is that some things get dropped by the wayside and forgotten (such as his magical pet).

Mages Are Too OP

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Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid

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