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I hope you do not deviate far from the storyline that you want to reach as many writers stop writing because they follow the wishes of the readers too much. I only remind you because I do not want to be the reason you stop writing. Btw, nice story.

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it would be hilarious if mc interrupt their fighting and they see mc is stronger than them

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This is just a suggestion, why not you just keep the already existing moveset instead of just 4, so they can have more combo move that you can deploy. Next, i dont think you should limit the number of movesets such as 10, 25 and soever, because right now you as the author have put the mc in a real world, and you would never see any pokemon used up all their move in pokemon world. Lastly, the pokemon move description i think you should just describe it when the pokemon has a new move to show what they can do. So, at default you could just write it like dig, slash, thunder and so on. I said this because it look messy with all the description and that take a lot of space. As i said before this is just a suggestion, its all up to you to use it or not and sorry for my english, cuz i am not proficient enough.

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