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I really enjoyed the beginning of the story. The author created an interesting world. Then after the mc defeats his first sovereign, the author throws out all the previous mechanics and the story hits light speed. Its like the author started holding his breath and wouldn't start breathing again until the story was finished. After that, it was still a decent story, but it just rushed through soo quickly that it felt like the condensed, abridged version. The power ups became ridiculous. Where before it would take several chapters to level up, he would just start gaining 10s to 100s of levels at a time, leaving the reader with little understanding of what it even meant. All characters, besides the mc, were basically shoved to the side, but mentioned occasionally so that you know that they were not forgotten by the author, just abandoned. The author either was somehow forced to quickly finish his whole story, grew bored or just became too lazy to continue it properly. He took what could have been a really great story and reduced it to a decent read.

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It was a good story. My only real complaint is that this feels like the abridged version. It is like the author rushed the whole story as soon as the mc beat his first sovereign. The author, essentially, just through away all the mechanics and struggles from the beginning of the story. Not to say that it needed 3000+ chapters of filler, but the story could have been a little slower, methodical and more fleshed out. Maybe somewhere between 500- 1000 chapters would have been nice. Seeing the mc slowly building up, taking out some more sovereigns before the war, Interacting with his household more and spending more time on the mechanics that made the beginning so interesting.

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This guy is kind of dumb... He is super rich... why not just move. The mc cant really go that far, distance wise. If he started spreading out and relocating the mc wouldn't be able to do much to him. I know that moving comes with risks of its own, but if he is careful and does it right he will be fine and can continue to grow.

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