Webnovel Author: BoundlessSarcasm - Fanfic Collection

Yeah I will try and work on that. Hopefully next time we are back on Earth they will be strong enough to be helpful

Ok I will try to follow work on my characters I tend to rush a bit when I have a idea that I want to do. I will also try and make the power of the MC more consistent. It is just hard sometimes as I do want there to be struggles in each fight to keep things interesting. I will try and balance it out. I will try and make sure that he is more prepared and try and flesh out the world more. Thanks for the input.

Yeah, I do plan for him to spend less time managing the organization. It seems to be the part that most people don't like. I will probably add interludes with the POV of other characters like JamJam75 advised to make up for it. Hopefully, it turns out better. Thank you for the input.

Yeah, I guess I was pretty vague about why the villains are seeming to do evil things. They do have a reason that will be explained in the next chapter but I guess I should have hinted at it a bit more. I also wanted it to be that he has a lot more challenges which lead to the imbalance between good and evil. Later we will see more of a balance in things as the military starts entering the picture after dealing with the villain in large metropolitan areas. Thank you for the input, I will try make sure that character motivations are better explained and make the world more realistic.

Yes, it was hard for me to fit in when he would train Haki as the only got it at the end of his stay in One Piece. I didn't think he would have much time to train during his stay on Earth considering he has been expanding his new organization. I will make him train it a lot in the next mission though now that he has more time to train and improve himself. As for the mental stuff, I don't know. I do plan for him to learn tactics and learn to lead men in the next arc but he won't be a genius. I don't know about AI as the next world I plan to send him on is a fantasy one. Honestly, I kinda wanted Mary to fit that type of role. Thank you for your input though I will keep it in mind.

Ok, I will try to make him a bit more well-rounded on his next mission and make him improve on the stuff that he said he needs to work on in the previous chapters. I will also try and make sure to work more on the side character the next time he is back on Earth. Thanks for the feedback.