LORDGENERALG

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PTSD- Find a better word, needs longer effect.

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I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

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LORDGENERALG

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uhh- Necessary?

"It's fine." Savina responded by shaking her hands. "I would be hesitant talking to some random person too. As far as you two know, I could have a taste for elf." Savina laughed. Realizing she had just made a joke about eating the two people sitting in-front of her, she continued. "Anyways. My name's S- uhh, Neia. Yeah, it's of elven descent, I believe."

I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

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LORDGENERALG

2yr

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Touch to open.

Lost from all the words, Savina was about to touch the Second Life package before she heard the innkeeper's voice over the sounds of those drinking.

I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

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LORDGENERALG

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Gay

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LORDGENERALG

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Wow seems like a nice start for a promising series, I'm gonna enjoy reading this one as it goes. Most of all it actually has good writing down and you can see the clear character development that is about to go down.

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I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

I'm a Dead Queen and the Champion of a Goddess?

The Soul Forge: Nephalem (Paused)

The Soul Forge: Nephalem (Paused)