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so, we have some lazy writings of common tropes such as reincarnating and a system. both of wich are equally overused, and so far, poorly executed. the system was only used as an excuse to get the university going, and the reincarnating was a excuse to Start in an advanced age for the MC without any strings attached. so far, it would have made more sense to make the esports captain the mc, as far as coverage goes. ATM i cannot say this is a good novel, in my opinion, its rather bad. but this is clearly the first novel of the writer, so i cant really blame him or her too much. by the amount of text He put down, He at least invested the time to Type it down, how bad it might be, at least He did IT, and published it here, wich is more than most of us ever Had the creativity or Courage to do. but If He wants to get better, the first Thing i would recommend, is to get some help from a native english speaker. Just ASK in novel forums, i am sure there are people that want to help, even If its only so they can at least partly fullfill theyr desire to make a better novel. Just remember to give Credit, and try to learn AS much as possible. watch english shows, read books or listen to audio books. too many a novel were ruined by horrible grammer and Lack of Proofreading. lastly, i can only say: good luck and have fun! also, my phone uses German Autocorrect,and this was a pain to do[img=recommend]
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the writing quality is good so far, the translation quality as well. the only issue I have, is that the first chapter is not a real chapter, not even half a chapter. also... only 20 chapters(19, really) for free in trial read? I will use one free fast-pass a day, but that's about it. at least give us 40 chapters to get propperly hooked... as for the low rating: there is almost No world design, as it is reallity so far, so 1* there. updating, also 1* so far, cause no updates. char design is 3*, because at least we have a normal person as the MC. writing quality is 4*, i noticed small Errors here and there, but waaaay less than in most novels. and Story developement i gave 4* because it is relatively fast paced, with decend amount of information about the MC, his sister and a friend. all without filler. so Overall 2.6*
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