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At the age of 10, he was sent to a place he didn't know only to return 17 years later. While his Original body hasn't aged his mind has. Using things he learnt while away, Erik attempts to continue his dream of becoming strong. -------------------------------------------------- Currently in Indefinite hiatus may return at some point.
Awakening Mystic Eyes of Death Perception after their Death they are chosen by an unknown being to make a deal. By choosing to accept the Being's request they, in turn, get to live again. If you want instant OP mc don't bother reading. I suck at synopsis sorry. basically, I was reading Tsukihime and had the urge to write something with similar problems Shiki has with his eyes. I couldn't really find a world that felt right apart from Naruto so here we are. I obviously don't own anything from Naruto or from Tsukihime. The cover picture isn't mine found it on google images.
JAsura: I don't understand why you aren't using the Random Skill and Bloodline. Is it a thing to let things rotten in your possession like the wishes?Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C34
tear_drop: this was by far the worst chapter of the entire novel. If the bleach ark is gonna continue that way i might drop this novel actually :DTraversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C33
OldMan_DEUS: 13 year old kid comes and knocks on door and says - take me in.
Ichigo says - ok come in but let my daddy decide.
nigga what the f#*k??Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C33
Not_a_Penguin: *Meanwhile outside the womb*
ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA!Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C2
fearlessj2008: don't why but the other chapters were great except this one.Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C38
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C17
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C14
JacobRayleigh: Artefact is British Spelling and Artifact is American. Both are right.Spirit Cultivation · C67
Spirit Cultivation · C64
Darkdelusion: When one calls someone who casually gave away immortal technique a commoner.🤣🤦♂️. Ignorance or stupidityDual Cultivation · C47
LNG: Is it wrong to hang out with your wang out in a dungeon?Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C92
CANAAN: The grammer is well enough and characters skillet is right up my alley. Unfortunately he's totally not likable until a certain mission involving a package.
That mission was awesome and really ft the authors hidden writing skills. I say hidden because most of the time he invests the energy of them in the wrong places.
The first half of the story is the character complaining about everything and nothing regarding his evel of power in some attempt to explain why he isn't a god level shinobi yet... Limiting him to his body and age would have been more than enough of an explanation instead of coming up with lame side effects that you then never enter into the story again...
The character is an orphan and at some point suddenly got a new surname. He chose something that had no relation to anything. Not gai who tool him in. Not anyone significant he met. Not the nanaya assassination art he practices. I really thing that was another misser for making your story feel more cohesive, more consistent in a positive way. Nanaya Shiki. It has a good ring to it to it that would have tied a lot of your story together.
Overall I did like a lot of things in the story if not the execution of most of the story.
I loved how hiruzen was just another danzo in reality.
I loved the entire skillset you chose for your MC.
I loved izumi as his girlfriend, simply because its such a rare choice.
I loved his being looked after by gai.
I loved you tying him in with the snakes due to how he got reincarnated.
I loved his time in anbu.
Still. I have rated the way I did because I had to rate for the entire story. I don't like how it started. I liked the middle. I lost interest at the genin team which was basically a summary every chapter once again.Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto
iMahiro: Just open p*treon and release advanced chapters there. That way people still get to enjoy your work, while those who want to support you can support you via p*treon.Fate/Heroes · C0
tekite: I swear Arth is just an alternate version of Harry. Dense, retarded and beta af. The only thing thats making me keep reading is the good writing and world building st this stage, the MC is underwhelming honestly. I wish the author would flesh him out more. Literally the only thing we know certainly about Arth is that he is a beta and that he has no personality except eating turkey legs, which he cant even eat anymore. So yeah. The MC is figuratively dead.Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows · C183
FrostPhoenix: ... Is it just me or is the mc getting more "beta" every year and going along with everyone else's will? At least he thought ahead and stuck to his opinions in his first year... even if he was almost invincible.
Wait could this be the brainwashing of plot/timeline or even worse stupidity from hanging out with Ron!
I'm sure he knows and probably told Hermione in some earlier chapter that elves need to serve to survive so it's not really slave labour (exchange is magic the elf needs to live).
Rather than have her preach of freeing the elves and killing them eventually with that ideology, couldn't Arthur convince her that better treatment is what she should aim for.Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows · C181
AwronZizao: I'm disappointed because Issei just feels like a side-character in this arc. Going along with the story without making any obvious changes is dumb, because you're just using the canon without any creativity other than throw this girl and that girl into the MC's arms. I'm one of those "all girls for the MC" but I still like to see some creativity in the story other-wise it's just plain. Most of the regular characters are already out-shining Issei, which is why he's so bland and boring this arc. He needs to shine more, have more of an opinion rather than just sit their and let the plot drag him wherever it feels like. If he notices something, make him act on it and stray from the plot, it makes the story that much more interesting.The Wish of the Dragon · C48
The Divine Anime System
CalamityofHeaven: Man i know its late now to tell you this but please dont let this morons opinion impact your story lith needs to learn how to function in magic society if they dont understand that and want an asocial moron as an mc its their problemSupreme Magus · C78
ErozothDraeor: i find using an existing person as a character very cringy. not liking it at all. A cameo if you are a fan sure but its going place id rather not read in a novel.Immaculate Spirit · C17
CestMoi: He is 4 basically in logical sense even in that world such choices wont be made by him instead be handled by adults. So having gran ask for what he want to do now is like asking a 4yr old kid to how to live your life. Put yourself in that situation, would you ask a child of what does he want to do with his life after that tragical event?The Divine Anime System · C6
Biocole: Read chapter 19 again
"Ince Zangwill. Male. Forty years old. Former archbishop. A Gatekeeper who failed in his promotion and was enticed by the devil and was corrupted. He escaped with Sealed Artifact 0-08. Particular traits are…0-08 appears to be a common quill, but it does not need ink to write. "
WTF...Lord of the Mysteries · C210
Kanechan: 'Im a person who looked directly at the blazing eternal sun' Klein that doesnt make you brave, it makes you stupid.Lord of the Mysteries · C160
Darkdelusion: I wonder how many chapters it may take for some members to physically meet each other.
I want to see the meeting of two main protags- Klein and SusieLord of the Mysteries · C146
Lord_Kami_Sama: Some Theorizing:
We know :
0 - Fool => Seer > Clown > ?
XII - The Hanged Man => Sailor > Folk of Rage > Seafarer
XI - Justice => Spectator > Telepathic > Psychiatrist
So what if:
XVIII - The Moon => Sleepless > Midnight Poet > Nightmare
I - The Magician => Apprentice > Trickmaster
XIII - Death => Corpse Collector > Gravedigger > Spirit Medium
II - The High Priestess => Instigator > Assassin > Witch
XV - The Devil => Monster > ?
IX - The Hermit => Savant > Archeologist > Appraiser
V - The Hierophant => Marauder > Swindler
XVII - The Star => Mystery Pryer > ? > Warlock
Left : III - The Empress, IV - The Emperor, VI - The Lovers, VII - The Chariot, VIII - Strength, X - Wheel of Fortune, XIV - Temperance, XVI - The Tower, XIX - The Sun, XX - Judgement, XXI - The WorldLord of the Mysteries · C76
SangN123: Author... you know your cards so well mad respect! To many to be used some should be banned for sake of mindYu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C11
Peace12345: Meh, that would just make the segregation even worse. They already have the dorms and the duel counter that counts their win/loss record. I think that's good enough.Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C11
zero2307: make a single chapter with your decks and cards in them so that it doesn't look like he can pick cards from scratchYu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C11
Gilgamesh_: I geuss but still its better if she somehow awakens it or something i mean koto amatsu kami has so much uses giving it to her would be a wasteCursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C75
Issou: Nevermind then, if the solution of every plot hole is "KILL IT" then y not. Then again I'm probably going too far saying it's a plot hole, I just hope you'll manage to make this eye useful because he is taking some risks + he is going to waste some time for this resource. If there is no curse then I admit it's pretty fair, my bad.Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C75
JakeElliott: Of course I know the GX. He knows the danger but he has basically every card which can be made into ultimate future decks to destroy current threats to the world. Whilst he's here and for the first part of being at DA he'd like to enjoy it and have fun as it's intended as a sort of sport / gameYu-Gi-Oh GX: Supreme Emperor · C11
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