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why is it Shivani now, before it was Shilo?
Shivani had a melancholic expression as she visited the kitchen remembering some memories.
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
This is good, it is just one repeated paragraph from the previous chapter. Thank you🙂
If Sean was going to marry Dwight he would of course need to follow where Dwight is. If Dwight is still in Layton Lewis' Army which is still assigned at the border Sean also needs to stay at the border.
After Breaking Up, I Married the General
LGBT+ · Ann_Lucy_4506
*Lyre not Ryzel
"I did ask my brother to beat up that bast*rd Dwight for Ry but he didn't say anything when he got home so I assume he didn't do that. Oops-" Ryzel stopped what he was saying and awkwardly smiled while looking at Layton Lewis and Mervin.
After Breaking Up, I Married the General
LGBT+ · Ann_Lucy_4506
I hope that Kimmy will recover.
ch 462 Brewing Wars (Part 2)
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
Please don't start a new chapter by repeating too much from the previous chapter. For me it breaks the flow of the story. If you have to repeat a bit of the previous chapter 1 or 2 paragraphs is ok, but not more than that.
ch 32 Chapter 31: Eating Breakfast Prepared by the General, Part 2
After Breaking Up, I Married the General
LGBT+ · Ann_Lucy_4506
Is it possible that she is pregnant again?
She went to the cocoa tree. She remembered craving for chocolate in her pregnancy. Was it because she wasn't unsatisfied at the time that she was getting these cravings again?
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
maybe "wasn't unsatisfied" should be "was unsatisfied" or "wasn't satisfied", but I am not sure
She went to the cocoa tree. She remembered craving for chocolate in her pregnancy. Was it because she wasn't unsatisfied at the time that she was getting these cravings again?
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
so he also *has* one.
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The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
2 times 200 units of wood? is there a mistake?
- Building Costs: 200 units of wood, 200 units of wood, and 20 silver coins]
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
did you mean to use baffling instead of bluffing ?
Long Haoran's pupils constricted and he was too late to block it. However, when he though he would perished, he did not feel pain at all and what's more bluffing was his HP only dropped by [-50] points.
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
I think it should be Little Lotus, if I remember correctly Little Mantou is the fox
Little Ginseng and Little Mantou spent a minute fanning away the dust to regain their views of the field, and what they saw made them drop their lower jaws on the ground.
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
Altera not Althea. I am thinking you were referring to the village.
It was also a plan that would inevitably place Althea in a lot of people's maps.
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
A slight mistake: it just said that it has 52 000 hp, and now it went up.
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The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
prosthetic hand*
After a while, Jiang Zhi added seriously, "Don't worry, we'll find you a prosthetic leg when we go hunting out of the base."
[BL] Strongest in the Apocalypse
LGBT+ · DevilishSmiley
maybe less than half a century 😜
After a while, Zhang Rui stopped crying. He looked at Jiang Zhi seriously. "I really can't believe the world would change so fast! I've only lived half a century and haven't had a partner. Why are people turning into zombies?"
[BL] Strongest in the Apocalypse
LGBT+ · DevilishSmiley
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 341 Reaching Althea
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 132 Li Chunhua, the Animal Whisperer
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
You are
But why does she feel she was being kicked out?
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
Yes, but I like it. I am glad that they can start to mend their relationship
ch 365 Chapter 357. Mark of Devotion (1)
There’s No Love In the Deathzone (BL)
LGBT+ · Aerlev