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UncleLeiFeng: "Legend of the Racist Author" had a lot of potential for a LitRPG fanfic. Self-evolution through awakening genes and then combining them could make for some very interesting content. I tried really hard to like it, reading 125 chapters before giving up on it entirely.
The author's blatant racism ignores the scientific fact that humans are 99.5% similar. Regardless of skin color and appearance, we've got mostly the same genetics and we're not actually that different. He also bakes in legends to the DNA, which doesn't work. Especially since he's somehow awoken the genes of Sun Wukong, the monkey king. Obviously Sun Wukong isn't part of any human genetic tree. And if it's just the *story* that matters, you could awaken the power by being told the story - no genes required. In any case, anyone would be able to awaken any genetic power regardless of race or heritage.
Despite that, he invents the "disgusting egg-humans" (chapter 105 and on) which are people forced by a corporation to undergo genetic modification to become white and undergo brainwashing to ensure loyalty. Horrifying as the concept is, the victims shouldn't be treated as disgusting. However, since the author is racist to his core, he uses this to express the superiority of Chinese culture and legends because it's all a racist metaphor for the foolishness of giving up on Chinese culture to accept anything western. Yes, he actually argues that someone else's fictional mythology is inferior to Chinese fictional mythology (chapter 125 and a few other places). Apparently there are still new lows to racism, where we argue over who made up the best lies about the origin of the world.
He destroys the only record of a revolutionary alchemy method because he can't trust any other race. That's right. It wasn't because he was suspicious of the company's goals (which he was). It was because he couldn't stomach a white person learning it. From chapter 102: "He had no way to hide this, but it was impossible for Feng Lin to allow people like Frank and Aike from the white race to obtain this inheritance. Since they weren't from his own race, their intention would surely be different." Wow. That's the kind of mindset the author has.
Let's not forget that one of the minor villains is a Japanese assistant (turned white through that contrived ritual). Of course he spitefully backstabs the MC, who comments that it was expected because all Japanese are jackals. From chapter 115: "As expected of a Japanese. Even though he changed his race, his jackal-like personality and the habit of biting his own master would never change." Can't have a Chinese novel without attacking the Japanese.
I wish I was making this trash up. In a perfect world, racist trash like this wouldn't have 15 million views and a rating of 8.4 in China. However, with nationalism and propaganda being more important than basic humanity, trash like this doesn't get hidden - it gets published and makes a racist author rich. I wish we lived in a world where no one reads or writes this trash.Legend of the Mythological Genes
unknown0618: A even though I’am Chinese myself, I want to bleach my fucking eyes after reading this pile of bull****. This **** is filled with racism Chinese supremacy, and as a fan of mythology i want to rip this boom, I feel sorry for the translator/s of this novel, he’s doing a great job translating this pile of **** but he should quit translating this novel and translate another novel instead.Legend of the Mythological Genes
Daoist_Rubeno: Author is racist prick where chinese are supreme and other races are inferior. Every fucking time enemy is Japanese.
Freaking corrupted chinese government!Legend of the Mythological Genes
skyknight: Author is Neo Nazi. Novel is all about 'Superiority of Yellow Race( Han Chinese) and how White race is inferior (Westerners)' and like all Chinese novels there are 'Japanese' villains all over the novel. The novel is nothing but Author's attempt to earn Chinese Credit-Points. There are three super powers in this novels namely China, West and Russia. India and Middle East forms Second Class powers, Vikings(Nords) and African nations third class powers. Author tries to convince in every way possible to audience how only Chinese Gods are Superior.Legend of the Mythological Genes
lolygaging: is anyone else thinking about the fact that hes damaging the room?Legend of the Mythological Genes · C75
Xyrox: So humanity is still as retarded as before?Legend of the Mythological Genes · C63
DreadWolf84: Question, what in the heck happened to the school? Why didn’t they call looking for their top ranked student? Too many logic and plot loop holes that don’t make sense. Dropping this because it isn’t worth the stones for this.Legend of the Mythological Genes · C46
docmoya: how exactly does one build up a resistance to nutrients and life-force, what a bunch of malarkey. if you wanted to slow down his progression to this frustrating pace just give him less in the first place. how is anyone supposed to survive if you can build up a resistance to nutrients. Utter nonsenseLegend of the Mythological Genes · C46
Bartzabel: Oh god we have a crazy person...Legend of the Mythological Genes · C5
KARBONZ: Also hated how he was skeptical about becoming a monkey. Seriously what's great about being humanLegend of the Mythological Genes · C5
izuna: i got bored after chapter 38 i personally i think the story became pointless after you basically settled him down at six years old and to the system at that. the system was suppose to help him along his journey not get jealous girlfriend fever and possessive an also not give him missions for six year when that was her purpose in the story to begin with she should have just stayed a little sister figure she is not FL material. Btw what person starts thinking about getting married at 12 i understand it was supposed to be a cute story but there is no destination he says he wants to enjoy his life to the fullest but what does that entail getting married? having a few kids? travelling and exploring the world? and if all he wants is to settle down what was the point of going to a world with alot of action is? have you even thought of the plot line or are you just going with what you feel like doing that day when you write each chapter
p.s. i don't think your story is bad but, i do think the plot has no real direction. anyways best of luck!A Lazy Man's Adventure
Elude: Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone.
It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism?
I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing.
The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward. Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well.
Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers.
For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow.
So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN.
Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable.
Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.)
Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me.
Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5.
World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5
Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out. This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story.
This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
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thiago_nvz: Sometimes the lust of the crew in this site amazes me, they read that a powerful, sometimes evil and cruel supernatural all might being shows up, and the first thought is to add It to the harem. Really astonishing.Dragonborn Saga · C467
heavenlyundead: should have titled this "the revenge of the cringe".Dragonborn Saga · C459
Dracul_Cifer: Thanks for the chap!
I am the only one disappointed by this chapter who contains more lyrics than story?Dragonborn Saga · C405
delltree100: say good bye badass jon and say hello weak jon. this arc is borring damnDragonborn Saga · C353
unIReap: Don u know ur my man ,but this is great A bullsh1t now ur losing ur touch. Get your act back togather.Dragonborn Saga · C353
motorkua4: Problem is not losing of MC. Problem is pathetic MC. Not like because his hardship, but because he is actin differently that before. His character, actions, IQ, style and way how he is dealing with problems did change too much. Normally we se evolution of character, how he is learning, moral grow etc., but this is opposite. Shouldn't he in bad situation work more and try better?Dragonborn Saga · C353
Dracul_Cifer: I'm starting to lose hope this arc is too longDragonborn Saga · C353
EinlionsBtch: Does no one temeber that dream he had on the ship
Blue flames killing doing someone elses bidding
No oneDragonborn Saga · C348
Mydrakil: getting rather annoying with all the short time jumps back an forth, just not my taste to read like that, but overall ill tough it up until it gets back to normal again :)Dragonborn Saga · C335
Long_winded_Sage: Any chance that child mentioned by the priestess is the cat?Dragonborn Saga · C335
NuggerNaut: really? that is an enjoyable story telling mechanic for you? im really starting to get annoyed keeping track of all the time skips. *three months later* no wait *three months before* then *two months later* but wait we havnt heard about *two months ago* its getting tiresome. that with jons "inability" to contact any of his "family" for help is kinda pissing me off.Dragonborn Saga · C334
sharkboy26: No offence but the last two chapters are just loosing my interest in the storyDragonborn Saga · C332
Dracul_Cifer: Yeah but I really dislike this type of things like the mc power are sealed or stolen for a certain time plus don't tell me is his unable to use aura or any other power he has to kill the vine you have made him too powerful for that and what about his labor?Dragonborn Saga · C331
Dracul_Cifer: You were right Don it's ****ed up and I hope you don't disappoint us by making something even more ****ed up because I am almost dropping it, if you didn't warn us I would already done it so I will wait for the next chapter and seeDragonborn Saga · C331
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Don_Dokhmesy: Finally! I almost gave up on those comments man!Dragonborn Saga · C326
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