This couldn't be much worse. I'm out, seen better writing from 5 year olds.
ch 11 Farming -Part 1
Fantasy · lumydee
I think your seriously overrating his intelligence dude.
ch 0 8 Inspection - Part 3
Fantasy · lumydee
Gigity
Secondly, Jean had Tony became one.
Movies · 012kamote
Ch. 1 instant POV shift Ch. 2 girl reaches next lvl cultivation just cause she slept with the MC Dumb. I'm out o/
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Initial Stage of the Corporal Foundation
Fantasy · Lruska
Sorry author dude I'm out. The story is pretty good but you use WAY to much world building and P.O.V shifts and not nearly enough time with the MC to make it worthwhile or interesting enough to wade through said world and POV stuff.
ch 34 Contract
Fantasy · Man_of_culture
This is the third time you've unlocked his poison resist lvl1 and the second time you've unlocked his poison affinity lvl1.
[Poison whip lv1, poison resistance lv1, poison affinity lv1 unlocked!]
Fantasy · Man_of_culture
Why would you apologise for getting beat up? She was the one in the wrong.
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Eastern · Suiyan
Why does he need a weapon when he is one???
If he's a human, he can just store daggers or swords on his side but with his form, he needs to continuously condense his darkness to hold the weapon even if he's not fighting
Fantasy · KenceRussel
P. S. I'm not saying that to be insulting, I'm stating facts.
ch 11 Farming -Part 1
I'm the King Of Technology
Fantasy · lumydee