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Won't that cause his parents to come out early? Also wouldn't that trip alarms on external monitoring to the excess chakra that he's going to start leaking from undoing the seal.

Marital may have mostly wasted a lot of time in his youth but it was still years of life that he somewhat trained and lived life growing under the strain of the intense chakra on his body slowly adapting to it. But undoing the seal could cause severe problems for him so early on.

Also he hasn't restarted sage training yet. View More
Re:Naruto · C10
11 hours ago

Carefree_shadow: Hmmm it seems to me the mc / author will only end up ruining his stories mc by his meddling. It doesn't seem like he has taken a moment to step back and acknowledge that his story has come to life and his characters are real people with actual thoughts and dreams of there own. The story will have to be different even if the mc just died off like in his original story since now everyone is now a actual living being instead of cannon fodder and background characters. It's not just the mc and his harem plus the bullies it's also the other 20 to 30 people in the class that are never mentioned that are now there with their own strengths and ideas and words that would probably changing things from minute one of his reincarnation. The teachers seem to be moving more than what he said they did in the novel and not to mention how some random nameless person that was never mentioned in the novel could be stopping a named person for a second and be causing ripples in the structured timeline and those events stack rapidly since schools could have Thousands not to mention the probable billions in the new world and the events that are happening every second outside of the view of the novel. Possible revolt of the commoners? New laws passed limiting the scope of power of the strong? Or maybe it's a mass taxation on the poor? Slavery? New wars? Political parties? Droughts? Floods, fires, staff at the school getting fired and new rules enforced and or old trashed?


The possibilities are endless

Surviving In My Novel · C10
13 hours ago
Hmmm it seems to me the mc / author will only end up ruining his stories mc by his meddling. It doesn't seem like he has taken a moment to step back and acknowledge that his story has come to life and his characters are real people with actual thoughts and dreams of there own. The story will have to be different even if the mc just died off like in his original story since now everyone is now a actual living being instead of cannon fodder and background characters. It's not just the mc and his harem plus the bullies it's also the other 20 to 30 people in the class that are never mentioned that are now there with their own strengths and ideas and words that would probably changing things from minute one of his reincarnation. The teachers seem to be moving more than what he said they did in the novel and not to mention how some random nameless person that was never mentioned in the novel could be stopping a named person for a second and be causing ripples in the structured timeline and those events stack rapidly since schools could have Thousands not to mention the probable billions in the new world and the events that are happening every second outside of the view of the novel. Possible revolt of the commoners? New laws passed limiting the scope of power of the strong? Or maybe it's a mass taxation on the poor? Slavery? New wars? Political parties? Droughts? Floods, fires, staff at the school getting fired and new rules enforced and or old trashed?


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Surviving In My Novel · C10
13 hours ago
Hiya I'd suggest adding voice analysis and a stride tracker on the elevator View More
MARVEL The Fallen Knight · C6
19 hours ago

Carefree_shadow: Maybe one day he will max his basic genes... I know he has fused them into higher tier genes but the basics are still the foundation of everything and ocd can be crippling.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C250
4 days ago
Maybe one day he will max his basic genes... I know he has fused them into higher tier genes but the basics are still the foundation of everything and ocd can be crippling. View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C250
4 days ago
10000 galleons? That's way to much they made there joke shop with less than 1000 galleons I believe. The sudden influx of cash could change the mindsets or direction they want to go since they didn't start talking about the shop till their later years at Hogwarts View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C53
5 days ago

Carefree_shadow: Are you going down the path of bringing them into the Inner circle of his secrets in Hogwarts? Are we going to have a teacher and his disciples situation? Or just bringing them into the ror?

Id hope not since they are supposed to be young girls even if one is a pureblood there still young which has become less obvious in the authors writing btw. The girls are still naive and young minded and don't have the mcs magical knowledge and protection of the mind. It would be like putting a sheep in a room full of wolves but the sheep only sees a field of flowers and other sheep. They are not ready to be up front and center yet.

The first year may be a bad place to bring them in to the fold so I'm hoping for a lie of sorts or a simple time Turner moment to remind himself to stand firm in that conversation.

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C49
1 week ago
Are you going down the path of bringing them into the Inner circle of his secrets in Hogwarts? Are we going to have a teacher and his disciples situation? Or just bringing them into the ror?

Id hope not since they are supposed to be young girls even if one is a pureblood there still young which has become less obvious in the authors writing btw. The girls are still naive and young minded and don't have the mcs magical knowledge and protection of the mind. It would be like putting a sheep in a room full of wolves but the sheep only sees a field of flowers and other sheep. They are not ready to be up front and center yet.

The first year may be a bad place to bring them in to the fold so I'm hoping for a lie of sorts or a simple time Turner moment to remind himself to stand firm in that conversation. View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C49
1 week ago
Retarded. Wizard why? The God is going to die and he will have to waste all the points getting to the point he can use magic without the systems that fall apart after the gods death and I don't think he will have enough even after luck 10 wizard. Also he would have 150+ sneak if he didn't put the points into literacy and if he just upgraded his rogue class again instead of wizard. Also why change his whole build to add in wizard which he doesn't main instead of taking his known path? He's moving as if he's still in a game. Also why is he going all last man standing for this village? I understand helping out but this doesn't seem to follow his character of being able to make the tough but cold call. View More
Abyss Domination · C65
1 week ago
The cabinets could be helpful for something. Could go through the room of hidden things for some original content items that have been misplaced or hidden within the room.

Hogwarts has been around for along time and there's been many generations that have come and past. There's probably been witches and wizards that have outclassed Dumbledore before and have left trinkets, books, memory vials and mirrors, goblin and fae made items. The room of hidden things seems to be the most mysterious area outside the old sealed up tunnels beneath Hogwarts that lead everywhere . Also there has to be thousands of old magic paintings of witches and wizards in the room so going through them and learning from some of them could be interesting and could open up a path for you as the author to broaden the world's history to more than a goblin war and 2 dark wizards. There's probably many prewett and black members in those hidden painting could be interesting talking to one or two. View More

AnonAuthor: It took me a Hour to get this to upload...

Hopefully You All Can Read It Now!

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C42
1 week ago
Could always make a original creature yourself adding even more original content. View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
2 weeks ago

Carefree_shadow: *why wont you tell me what's wrong with him?* maybe you should be he.


and the whole scene seems kinda like he should of seen it coming.

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
2 weeks ago
*why wont you tell me what's wrong with him?* maybe you should be he.


and the whole scene seems kinda like he should of seen it coming. View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
2 weeks ago

Carefree_shadow: Hmmm snape gets distracted by the hat calling out ravenclaw and his spell backfires burning his eyebrows and causes momentary blindness making him trip into one of the tables..... possibly

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C35
2 weeks ago
Hmmm snape gets distracted by the hat calling out ravenclaw and his spell backfires burning his eyebrows and causes momentary blindness making him trip into one of the tables..... possibly View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C35
2 weeks ago
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Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C35
2 weeks ago
Well at some point something big will probably blow up in Ron's face or he will be caught up in a butterfly effect from his changes that he may have to lay low off the grid for a bit and having connections to multiple at least somewhat civilized species could be helpful to have a place to regroup and also what a good hiding spot from the human wizarding world then the place that literally has forbidden in it name? Also the books only ever mention the goblin wars but there has to be more all over the place and a true reason that the forest is actually called the forbidden forest. Was there a possible treaty once upon a time between the allied magical 'fae' or folk and the human race to respect a boundary of sorts? Or was it just to many losses occurred over time? Which I believe the latter is unlikely since people are still risking there lives as aurors and curse breakers and travel around the world for multiple reasons.

Also would the forbidden forest be classified as a official danger zone then? If so are there more? Maybe Russia's redwood forests? Or northern Siberian forests / tundra? Or Japan's suicide forest? The grand canyon or at least parts that are on tribal lands? View More

AnonAuthor: I'd have to check and see if there's any indication of it's size, bit even if there's not. The problem then lies with how far do I take it? If it's too big then I might have to spend more time on it, while if it's too small it might seem forced.

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Well we always see and hear about discrimination of the magical species but never really see much of there communities the closest we get is the goblins and the elves but the goblins seem to stick to there underground cities and the elves are slaves so.... not the best picture is shown really. View More

AnonAuthor: I see that you're the type of person that wants to see the World Burn!

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Now I'm awake and should be asleep but how big do you think the forest actually is? Does it appear on maps? Is it entirely enchanted and space around it is really distorted? Could it be thousands or tens of thousands of miles wide and only look smallish from the outside? because remember a lot of things live in the forest and they never really explore it. What about the ocean... The earth is 2/3rds covered in water and if you pull up a map of the earth there's vast stretches of ocean with nothing there but water. Could a continent be hidden out there? What about the thousands of random islands? The opportunity for hidden unregulated magical communities is massive.... hmmmm. View More

AnonAuthor: Thank you for the great ideas, I'll think of someone else to replace Ron. As for everything else, I'm very keen on two ideas which so to spoilers I won't say.

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Now another thing that came to me centaurs in the forbidden forest seem to have a actual tribe or village set up but it's never explored in the original even though they seem to know about the prophecy already and they do mention something about the cycles of the moon or seasons I forget which but that could enfer that the centaurian people could still be active ritual users and could be a gateway to meeting other older species that live deep in the forest. Fae while a broad term for many species could open a lot of possibilities for trade of goods and a wide range of old but mostly forgotten information whether that be magic, history, or directions to the next source of miscellaneous information or goods.

Maybe there's a fruit that lets you shed your original body like a snake does his skin in the depths of the forest that hasn't been seen for thousands of years outside world. A place where dragons roam but not necessarily at the top of the food chain. Where thousands of a species can hunt and flourish together only to disappear forever from the forest floor at dawn, and places of horses of water and bulls of fire and ash.

You know the not so kid friendly camping trip :p

P.s. you could always knock querills turban (or is it just a headrap?) off his head with some sort of unraveling charm or jinx in the main hall during the sorting ceremony and throw the first year into original content territory ;) View More

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Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Neville? I hope not at least for the first year as he's quite shy and not as well learned as other purebloods. He's bullied a lot I believe in the first book and become as much of a bookworm till later so for the first year it may be tough. I believe it was mentioned somewhere that whoever was raising Neville didn't want him to learn magic till he got to Hogwarts after what happened to his parents so unless something drastic happens I cant really see him for year one going through the trap door on the third floor.

Also I wonder what would happen if snape found a list of all the spells and traps plus fluffys weakness on his desk the night he was planning to go after querril? Would he blow his cover finally to voldy and strike him down or would he step back into his dark role and end potter there or maybe we change shape for a certain transfiguration teacher I'd love to see a true fight from her as I don't believe the movie, books, or fan fictions give her enough credit as probably one of the most powerful witches in the Harry potter world. She is a bookworm and a academic to the core but she's been researching magic for most of her life and seems to me to be a vastly underrated and underused asset. She's the acting headmistress for a reason.

Also to the thought of slipping Harry a book on the mind arts without him knowing who it came from I'd hold off on it even though you haven't mentioned it yet. For 1 it would take time for Harry to get any true results unlike the movies suggest. 2 the suspicions on who gave it to him would appear and probably lead to unwanted situations. 3 it could mess the timeline up a little to much at this point. I'd suggest at the end of third year on the train he finds it in his bag as then he has the summer and in the third year Dumbledore is already dieting from the rings curse and he's out dealing with problems from the horcriux, death eaters, the ministry and it's meddling of Hogwarts, and his traveling to find potential allies to worry about how Harry came to acquire a book of the mind arts.

Also is the wizarding medical code the same as the muggle version? Does say... madam pompfrey if she sees signs of abuse does she have to report it to proper authorities? or is she another fanatic of Dumbledore? I've wondered this as Harry in the first movie is in her care and should realize he doesn't have any vaccinations for magical diseases and even if he gained weight over the year he should still show signs of stunted growth in his bones and musculature from years of abuse. Would she bypass Dumbledore and send the ministry a report first and then Dumbledore or would she go to him first and probably get told he will handle it personally?

I don't see that "happy" of a turn in Harry's life for the third year which happened because of Sirius saw scrabbers in a magical newspaper but maybe it will be a curve ball for Ron as a roadblock on a otherwise clear inheritance Sprint....

I'm looking forward to this XD View More

AnonAuthor: Yes! And Neville?

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
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Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Maybe it's time to giving Harry some seemingly harmless advice on not automatically trusting the seemingly harmless and kind individuals or in other words them not judge a book solely on its cover. Since snape, Dumbledore and probably voldy and who knows who else will be reading Harry's mind soon giving some good but vague advice to Harry could be immensely helpful.

Also who is supposed to take Ron's place in the first book in the trio? Unlike the Ron from the movies the one from the books actually helped quite a bit during the end of the first book so >.> View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C33
2 weeks ago
Hmmm the stone in the first year plus ancient runes, potions, Phoenix tears, and the banned rituals of old maybe the aunts clock could be turned back a few years by healing and purifying her body while strengthening her in the process since it would be a shame for her to go early in the story atleast. View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C31
2 weeks ago
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Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C31
2 weeks ago

Carefree_shadow: Good work. What about the runes of Hogwarts and there changes and broken parts? The changes of the runes could literally be doing anything. Maybe Dumbledore can see everything that goes on in Hogwarts from his office or siphon magic from the kids in there sleep to give himself a boost.

Also I'd love to see a scene where the main character talks to the ravenclaw ghost. Since she is probably the best choice to talk to about the history and issues of Hogwarts and it's staff plus the wards as the ravenclaw founder and clan probably did most of the original work with the wards.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C30
2 weeks ago
Good work. What about the runes of Hogwarts and there changes and broken parts? The changes of the runes could literally be doing anything. Maybe Dumbledore can see everything that goes on in Hogwarts from his office or siphon magic from the kids in there sleep to give himself a boost.

Also I'd love to see a scene where the main character talks to the ravenclaw ghost. Since she is probably the best choice to talk to about the history and issues of Hogwarts and it's staff plus the wards as the ravenclaw founder and clan probably did most of the original work with the wards. View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C30
2 weeks ago
Well it's 2 am here so that could be a sad fact for me atm :p View More

AnonAuthor: Sadly no, but two chapters tomorrow

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
2 weeks ago
So not another chapter today then XD View More
Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C0
2 weeks ago
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