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A professional killer making 20 billion? No..... make it like 15 - 30 million.... it's still way ridiculous but it wouldn't sound so half baked when reading it.... 7 years from the orphanage is no where near that time to acquire the contacts and skills to make 20 billion and there's no way a professional killer would make anywhere near that amount in their career. Plus you don't just jump into high paying jobs from the start that takes time, skill, connections, luck, and brains as in knowledge. All this would take decade(s) learning and doing plus you wouldn't be able to secure 20 billion. That amount would be easily found and or tracked to paying customers but a few million way more fluid to move realistically View More
Naruto'S WORLD: MY PLAYGROUND · C1
1 day ago
Hmmm in the early days of building his home people saw koral on the property probably while digging and or training and that information would of been sold and or brought to officials to be scouted since at the time the property was not surrounded by the dark forest. There would of been offical military scouts sent out to verify claims of a 9th lvl magical creature living on a small island lake. Also remember that when scouting out the mine from the original series they would of scouted the territory for more resources and the reports of a lvl 9 magical creature would of been a priority since it could be guarding a natural resource in the eyes of the population. Also they would of scouted out the forests treeline for potential dangers and advantageous locations where they could shore up look out locations and barriers / military fortifications to protect from potential tides before bebe knew of his familial ties. Also he didn't put up wards or runes until the first time he wanted to travel so travelers, adventurers, or just unlucky people should of at least stumbled upon their abode at least once in a decade. I believe in the original linleys group was offering good coin for information on matters regarding the territory making it more likely that dare devils would seek out less traveled areas to search for more valuable information to sell or profit from. And who's to say other than you as the author of the Mcs two beautiful girls weren't seen in those first few months from a distance since there was no saint on the property to scan for watchers and looky lous (?) View More

_Vlad_: Hmm... lets see, George lives in the Yulan Empire which is far away from were he lives so it is normal to have no connection, just as when he was a student he did not have communication with his parents as it took a whole year of travel to reach from one point to the other. About the auras of death on the Archaic Lands... he just found the effect of his fire with souls after he became a saint magus, remember that he had not much affinity to the edicts and he forced his way into them becoming a soul mutate, now that he reached the saint magus level his affinity to these edicts has grown but unless there is a soul around him he would not be feeling it as he did not do meditation for the edicts of fire magic as his sould automatically gathered the magical essence due to his soul mutation. And third, when he went to the Archaic Lands he knew that Linley would be there but he was focussed on his war and revenge and Reynolds did not want to have part in that and he did not tell anyone were he was going and only after he visited the Dawson Conglomerate a couple of chapter back did he reconnected with the world. Hope this helps, thanks for reading!

The Burning Fiend · C37
2 days ago
Hmmm you have mentioned linley and Yale but not George since he's made his new home. Maybe a sentence or two for him could be allocated somewhere soon or is he doomed to be the forgotten brother?
Secondly the lands he's in has seen massive wars for hundreds of thousands of years the amount of death aura or qi or whatever should be quite overwhelming to his senses.
Thirdly his home is in or is close to his brothers territory are you saying no one has come to see him in the decade+ he's been there? View More
The Burning Fiend · C37
2 days ago

Carefree_shadow: So..... vampire diaries and the originals and whatever the new show was called may cross over.... maybe America could become his home base since it seems kinda fractured and unstable making it perfect for a power grab and restructuring to a family run country leading to quickly more progressive push in the magical fields that have been banned or only behind closed doors for centuries

Harry Potter and The Loa's Child · C33
1 week ago
So..... vampire diaries and the originals and whatever the new show was called may cross over.... maybe America could become his home base since it seems kinda fractured and unstable making it perfect for a power grab and restructuring to a family run country leading to quickly more progressive push in the magical fields that have been banned or only behind closed doors for centuries View More
Harry Potter and The Loa's Child · C33
1 week ago
Author...... that promise is a major Detriment to everything in your story.... what classifies a "person" exactly in your story? What if he has to protect someone in the story but can't attack the enemies because of the promise? Or maybe he has to assassinate a "person" in the story. What about collateral damage? Aoe attacks? Why is the mc even making such a promise? He's not a naive good guy hero type. He's a 26 year old 170 iq *****. I don't understand the promise at all... View More
Infinite Survival · C5
1 week ago

Carefree_shadow: Once they sleep together she will soon realize she cannot handle him for any extended period of time and needs help which could lead to her pulling in female customers, and outside characters. Is the kids teacher hot? Hmmmm.....

Marvels Strongest Father · C29
3 weeks ago
Once they sleep together she will soon realize she cannot handle him for any extended period of time and needs help which could lead to her pulling in female customers, and outside characters. Is the kids teacher hot? Hmmmm..... View More
Marvels Strongest Father · C29
3 weeks ago
'Practice makes perfect' is the perfect ***** content title loool View More
SAO: The New Kirito · C1
3 weeks ago
A dead child is still a child u right. 50x gravity your bones snap his spine would twist out of socket his muscles would shred themselves from his broken bones which the marrow would probably be being pushed out of him and every inch of him would probably have every ounce of liquid and gas solidify and rip out of every hole the child has. His brain would stop working immediately stopping him from cutting off his abilities or healing himself and his organs would pop or burst from the pressure from everything I just said. Also he'd probably destroy his house from the earth below the foundations and up and probably kill anyone in the area of effect I.e. family. View More

Zeus742: he's a child, they are dumb and stupid

My Hero Academia With A Manipulation Quirk · C1
3 weeks ago

Carefree_shadow: Hmmm Gryffindor may be the worst house for her really since they are basically the most watched house on campus. Plus first years don't get individual rooms in Gryffindor so there's less free time away from prying eyes. Also I hope the author adds in a section of the library for ancient and forgotten language books that tell a lot more about hidden and or forgotten magic and magic history of different races and professions that may not be fleshed out to the public or officials.

Plus if muggles can't see or enter certain places in the world by warding or just natural magic of the region what's saying there isn't magical colonies, tribes, kingdom's even nestled all around with magic? I mean look at the forbidden forest, how large could it actually be? Is it mapped correctly to size? Centuars live within and probably in good quantity so they need a lot of room to move around, live in a community, hunt for food, etc.

Plus everything else we know giant spiders, trolls of variety, giants, Unicorns, and many more. So many places like the forbidden forest could actually be ancient frontiers that humanity stopped or something forced them to stop whether by force or treaty to set borders at set places and these events could of happened so long ago that most if not all but a few have forgotten and haven't publicly reaffirmed such events just saying these areas are forbidden zones.

Maybe old books of knowledge that nobody can read but the mc could open up a travel path into the forest or another such zone to meet such a intelligent race. If you do maybe we could see a little bit of brothers Grimm style darkness in the series.

The Story Of Nova Black · C7
3 weeks ago
Hmmm Gryffindor may be the worst house for her really since they are basically the most watched house on campus. Plus first years don't get individual rooms in Gryffindor so there's less free time away from prying eyes. Also I hope the author adds in a section of the library for ancient and forgotten language books that tell a lot more about hidden and or forgotten magic and magic history of different races and professions that may not be fleshed out to the public or officials.

Plus if muggles can't see or enter certain places in the world by warding or just natural magic of the region what's saying there isn't magical colonies, tribes, kingdom's even nestled all around with magic? I mean look at the forbidden forest, how large could it actually be? Is it mapped correctly to size? Centuars live within and probably in good quantity so they need a lot of room to move around, live in a community, hunt for food, etc.

Plus everything else we know giant spiders, trolls of variety, giants, Unicorns, and many more. So many places like the forbidden forest could actually be ancient frontiers that humanity stopped or something forced them to stop whether by force or treaty to set borders at set places and these events could of happened so long ago that most if not all but a few have forgotten and haven't publicly reaffirmed such events just saying these areas are forbidden zones.

Maybe old books of knowledge that nobody can read but the mc could open up a travel path into the forest or another such zone to meet such a intelligent race. If you do maybe we could see a little bit of brothers Grimm style darkness in the series. View More
The Story Of Nova Black · C7
3 weeks ago
So he needs a push I guess? Something to clear the wool from his eyes ? View More

MarineEngineer: Don't worry because MC won't go full batman I promise

Story of an Unfortunate Man(MCU verse) · C3
4 weeks ago
He literally attacks miners and loggers in the forests raining hell upon them with mother nature deaths are probably aplenty in the life. View More

ruzyne: please make him a killer, at least the bad guys. if not this sh*t is gonna get annoying real quick as bad guys in mcu usually finds a way to fu*k you ovet if you let them go.

Story of an Unfortunate Man(MCU verse) · C3
4 weeks ago
Yes yes give warnings to unconscious people great idea from immortal old men. View More
The path of the lustful demon · C137
4 weeks ago
Dun duuuun duuuuuuuuun!!!!! Now let's see if plot armor is a real thing next chapter XD View More
The path of the lustful demon · C136
4 weeks ago
Make it as long as it feels natural is the only advice I can give :) and I hope it doesn't start to feel tedious for ya to write in the future. View More

blue_cloud: I don't plan to make the novel more than 350 -400 chapters. Of course, I will not rush things too much and might increase the total chapters if there were things needed to be added.

The path of the lustful demon · C128
1 month ago

blue_cloud: For those who ask about Liu Rushi, I decided to make her advance to the Heaven Soul Realm in the next chapter.

The path of the lustful demon · C128
1 month ago

Carefree_shadow: When you say finish what do you predict a few hundred chapters more or so?

The path of the lustful demon · C128
1 month ago
When you say finish what do you predict a few hundred chapters more or so? View More
The path of the lustful demon · C128
1 month ago
Idiots will be idiots ignore them and move on or flame them then ignore them and ride the high of saying you peace. I hope to see you continue. View More

Lazyy: Half-tempted to actually drop this now because of how much of an disrespectful idiot you are. Like, seriously, do you have to be such a c*nt?

Transmigrated into HOTD but with a Twist! · C0
1 month ago
It could be a planetary misunderstood term that points to quickly different type of cultivator from a higher plane of power that trickled down in time to match broad publicly frowned upon forms of cultivation as devilish. View More

ErozothDraeor: I'm liking this novel and the MC more each chapter. Only thing that feels a bit forced is calling him a "devil cultivator", it seems more of a story thing than truth, since even the "righteous" are doing the same as he does, ie using cauldrons.
It's not like he is going out and eating souls or anything, and if he is really a devil so are many other cultivators (aka the moon sect, the first sect he woke up in).

The path of the lustful demon · C124
1 month ago
looool I hope the sect master asks why the elder questioned his ruling. View More
The path of the lustful demon · C105
1 month ago
Keep thx for the info View More
Nova Black · C15
1 month ago
But once he steps into the light he can never be truly in the dark ever again and on the planet he's on now there's really no eyes watching out for him atm or would look for such a genius on the low level planet. View More

ArdentAngel: Also, Rank is important and he doesn't have it yet. You know, become an Aristocrat. He is still in First Sanctuary and only once he becomes an Evolved can he get it.

Not to mention, not even with rank and money can you buy everything, like the best cultivation technique/resources. For those you need connections. Even those in Saint Hall (or whatever it is called) aren't truly top-of-the-line. They are only Mainstream top-of-the-line.

Sure, his system can provide those, but it'll also make his family members stand out even more, with no plausible explanation. Which is probably why he is pushing for that technique to get approved in the Saint Hall and gain his help... Then he can say he developed them, or something.

Super Gene: Domination · C23
1 month ago
Family? No not really. With money and a clean record he can move them to a better world easily. With money he can buy protection and private teaching for his family. With the system and a.I. he can attack any company or clan that goes after him by tanking there stocks and wiping there servers and stealing company research and sending it to there competition. View More

ArdentAngel: Family.

Super Gene: Domination · C23
1 month ago
Why would he need backing exactly? He literally has access to everything he could possibly need atm. The system is well a system and he also has the a.I. that can fill in any gaps for him. He could literally ghost into the background and just power up till 3rd sanctuary layer where it would be a little harder for him to blend in. That would be the perfect time to show himself then. View More

ArdentAngel: Growth. No matter how special his system is, how much he knows about the story, he isn't omnipotent and reading can only get you so far.

At least in my opinion.

And he NEEDS recognition, just not TOO much of it--to gain that necessary backing.

Super Gene: Domination · C23
1 month ago
So... I do not say this lightly but did you just use God of lusts storyline for your episode one? A fanfic is a fanfic but damn man at least add your own twist on it.... I hope your story turns out great but damn that kinda bums me out a bit. Good luck. View More
Marvels Sex Master This One Is Really mine This Time · C1
1 month ago
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Marvels Sex Master This One Is Really mine This Time · C1
1 month ago

AuthorWiz: None of it is filler :) It's world-building information, stuff that fleshes out the world and power system!

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C36
1 month ago
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