Overall an amazing story. I love the world-building in it and I love the mc powers. It's probably going to suck tho when he becomes a slave. Gonna a be a drop for me if he doesn't find a way to exploit the ability.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
It's a good start. I can tell that the beginning will be a little slow, but as soon as he starts learning about his magic it will start to pick up.
Fantasy · Duke_Howell
The story is starting out fine, but in my opinion the chapters are way to short. All of the chapters could be merged together into 1 decently sized one, rather than having these small chapters.
Anime & Comics · RoyalMouse
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Overall an amazing story. I love the world-building in it and I love the mc powers. It's probably going to suck tho when he becomes a slave. Gonna a be a drop for me if he doesn't find a way to exploit the ability.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree