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PhilVictorovich
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So send him to equally powerful universes my friend, nerfing is never the answer.
That way, it becomes easier to sneak in, plus he can have the identity of a citizen of that universe and maybe deal with the problem of World Oppression.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Why do a decent % of authors believe a character being ruthless and cold makes them bland and therefore making them weak is somehow an improvement?
(So, I usually try to stay away from these kinds of moments. But recently, I realized how bland of a character he was and decided to add a little human touch to him.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Thanks but is the MC evil, neutral, good or what?
ch 0 1 The Descent of The Messengers
Merciless Dragon Knight
Fantasy · SIENDONIA
Haven't read the book yet I came here from your profile, mind describing the MC for me? From the description I think he's evil but then there's no tags so I don't know
ch 0 1 The Descent of The Messengers
Merciless Dragon Knight
Fantasy · SIENDONIA
It's radio and I'll never admit otherwise.
ch 0 8 Family
Mafia: Rise to Power
Urban · PhilVictorovich
Thanks, its a writing style not an omission though
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Mafia: Rise to Power
Urban · PhilVictorovich
Thanks, and no, definitely not
ch 0 1 Youth
Mafia: Rise to Power
Urban · PhilVictorovich
What kind of creature are you?
More face slapping? Another potentially good novel bites the dust
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The Demon Monarch System
Fantasy · Syphiinz
Brutality, Ruthlessness and Evilness have all just been categorized as edgy? Jesus, you people are too much.
'Either he is really good at acting or he is actually 100% serious about what he is saying. If so, then is he trying to be some sort of noble hero of justice? How childish,' Moby thought.
The Great Demon System
Fantasy · Drip
I assume he's going to turn her into his demonic servant by catching her off guard, so why doesn't he take his time, and make his move after they've finished having ***? That's her most vulnerable moment, and he'd get to take advantage of her as well before turning her into his servant. Feels more likely that this is just your excuse because while logical and the best way to handle this situation, killing 2 birds with 1 stone, you don't like it? If the MC is not gay, are you?
This was now Moby's best chance at catching her off guard.
The Great Demon System
Fantasy · Drip
Increasing spirit doesn't make you more intelligent, and who says humanity never needed great strength? We were, and still are, incapable of possessing great enough strength to directly solve our problems, and because of that, we had to endure thousands and thousands of years of being at the bottom of the food chain. Increasing spirit at this point is plain and simple just stupid, and having read the following 20+ chapters, I should have dropped this here after seeing the signs of a subpar decision making.
'So I have 5 points. Each point is basically a level. Each stat can be trained as well and I can also get them by absorbing. I will need to understand that ability more but that can come later. Right now, I think the best course of action would be to focus on Spirit, since it is directly related to my soul and my intellect. Also seems rather unique, has something about the magic pool, and communicating with mystical entities.. I will have to ask Enya about this later as well...'
The Last Primal
Fantasy · Shaele
No point in a response. It does make him weak, it wouldn't make it a bland character, but a more realistic one fitting the "law of the jungle" universe he is in.
(So, I usually try to stay away from these kinds of moments. But recently, I realized how bland of a character he was and decided to add a little human touch to him.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao