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Do you have a link for the fanfic the character is based off?

Where can you read the novel where the second technique comes from cause I can't find it plz send a link.

Where can you read the novel where the second technique comes from cause I can't find it plz send a link.

The fact your advertising in every chapter and as a result the chapter content it self is small leads me to not really liking any of your stories.

I mean FMA is kinda popular if they want know whats going on they can watch or search it. Less known things may face similar problems but I think the important part here is the Alchemy description so long as that is explained it should be fine.

Provide a link to the prequel of this story Universal Chaos Plz.

Provide a link to the prequel of this story Universal Chaos.

Take at least 20 to 25 chapters to finish up I mean its not boring by any yet or dragging along plus either before or after the first jump you have to prepare all though things mentioned with the limited info from HP-verse because you still haven't explored all its past history.

I think at least meeting the founders should have it own chapters and also you forgot about solving death plus show Edward having made slightly more preparations so he doesn't look so freaking stupid.

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I think there is a character that goes by Sage already, but I'm not really up for Hermit as his name. I mean I'd rather you call him trickster(supernatural TV series) or even Loki if need be at least it'll be a little funny when they face each other. As long as your not planning to mention Sage in your story you can use the name.

It has to be Power Anchoring as Perfect Overachiever even if will give a lot of content to use is a little overpowered for now when still at the beginning. Man of Mysteries is kinda a throwaway as it just streamlines his build(muscles). True Kryptonian(TK) or Essence of Home(EoH) will work however TK is mostly for fighting while EoH is better to develop abilities. I would choose EoH as unless he going to spar,learn magic, and missions from the Ancient One it's not much use as of yet since it seems we're still in the prep phase.