This is delenda est on fanfiction.net. I don’t know if he is the same as the author who wrote this story.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Prologue: The Death of Bellatrix
Book&Literature · AlexanderBlackfyre
Lost all intrest with previous chapter. Why introduce the sister character. I admit it’s not overused but it’s boring. I also hope she is not a romantic intrest, that is just desturbing on so many levels. Atleast build your MC more first, his adventures and how he gets more powerful. This felt like you had no idea how to move the story forward and just created the sister character.
ch 22 Chapter 22: Multi-Dimensional Chat Group l
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
I really like this story just for the simple facit that harry isn’t an antihero/villain in this story. I hope he will be the hero type. When it comes to the romance I really like it and can’t wait to see his other girls join. When it comes to romance I would prefer to focus this on the MC and not on the others so much. The last thing I also hope is that the girls in the harem are not bi. I would prefer for them to see eachother more like sisters that are closer than friends but not lovers. Would like them to just have romanic and sexual feelings for Harry. Like I said, this story so far is really good and one of my favorite on WebNovel.
ch 11 Intermission
Book&Literature · ShinXResolve
What ruins this story for me are the yuri vibes. When I read a story that says it's a harem storie I want the girls to be there for the mc. Yuri has always been my biggest gripe as a harem fan. Like 90% of the harem stories always have yuri in them. What I feel when I see yuri in a harem storie is just a waste of space. First of all why even do you need the mc just pair all the girls with eachother and he can watch them in the corner like a true cuck. It's not hot or an intresting consept, it's just annoying.
ch 46 39: Helping Heather Potter
Book&Literature · Daddy
Must say that I really like how dense he is. Much prefer this to all the arrogant selfcentered types that are so popular nowdays. [img=update]
ch 0 3 3: Interview and Re-Introductions
Book&Literature · Daddy
Why did you give her spider-mans powers. I am so tired of the spiderverse. Just makes Peter so irrellevent.
ch 174 C174 MJ’s Transformation
Movies · AlienWarlord
This story is called ”delenda est” and might be stolen from there. This author also uses patron to take completed stories to earn money.
Echoes of Destiny: Harry and Bellatrix's Second Chance
Book&Literature · AlexanderBlackfyre