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Wanted to say it could do with some R18 scenes(not too many, a few here and there) as it goes well with the theme, and then I’ve checked the chapters. I like you, my dear author!

Seems interesting, but it has a striking resemblance with the first chapter of ‘coiling dragon’.

I really like it as it is. It's something a little different, and many got bored of the same storyline. About the MC, I like him. Simp - I don't even know what it means. I have my guesses but the MC definitely is not one. Stiff - yeah, a little. Could be more charismatic, but I guess this is character development Let's say I see him a little... robotic. I've seen a comment saying to make him more gentlemanly and profficient in something, which I think it's a good idea. For the rest, keep at your own pace, or go faster, but preserve the story as many could say it's slow-paced(personally I don't mind). Anyways I like it and I'll read it, I understand you want to become popular and make money, but making the same thing as many others by listening to readers' choices will not make you different. You'll write the same story using different names and I think it's kind of difficult to do something to stand out in an ocean of same things.

Thank you! I thought I was the only one hating that girl. She's just too annoying. Dunno why but i don't see her as a likeable character. The MC it's kind of childish too, but I consider it as part of his development. For the moment at least.

Tbh, the book was too much of a cheat if he could use it as he pleases. I mean, he needs to experience some hardships to develop.