Bem detalhado até o momento, a personalidade do mc é boa o plot parece interessante, visto wue Gaia ta estranho a 13 anos e isso condiz com o tempo de desgraça do protagonista, a fmc provavelmente já foi inserida, o mc não pegou herança fudida de graça do velho (graças a deus) etc...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Kd tu?
É interessante você usar uns adjetivos diferentes quando for detalhar essas cenas R18, tipo varA, haste, amiguinha babando, vale etc...Todavia ficou bom e como não serão tão detalhadas futuramente, se pah nem vai precisar. 4 anos de timeskip sem enrolação e contos inúteis fodase
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Sorry for the spelling mistakes, I'm Brazilian and I'm using google translate to write this. Hello, I've been reading this novel for about 3 weeks and I've reached 982, where it shows that the entire universe of the author is connected, and not just 1 novel (Demon Queen Rebirth: I Reincarnated as a Living Armor?!) and now I'm almost half an hour trying to find out what other works are in this multiverse. I would like to know: which novels by the author are in the same multiverse (ALL????????)?. Epic of Carterpilar is a wonderful novel, it has the best harem I've ever read! I had never seen an interaction between the mc and their wives and children so masterfully done, apart from the fact that the system information was surprisingly detailed. Your writing is so good that I'm reading the novel in First Person (I always found this strange way of reading and I often got lost in the dialogues), congratulations, I'm coming to honor you every day here, THANK YOU!!!
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Epic of Caterpillar
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