you are misspelling the names of the photon monsters. it should be Photon etc but instead you are putting Proton etc.
Limbo: "With Dark Magician summoned to my field Dark Magic Circles effect activates I can banish one of your monsters and I choose Proton Thrasher," he said and a void opened up from below my monster Thrasher tried to move away but black chains attached themselves to thrashers body and dragged my monster into the darkness.
Anime & Comics · wiz161
what's this pokemon
After a little walking, they got to the school, They also passed Chloe's house and saw a Yellow dog sleeping at the front door, but of course, he shouldn't know it was her house so he ignored it.
Anime & Comics · Katsu39
international release
ch 36 Please read, this a quick question
Anime & Comics · DSComeback
*an
So he tries to minimize his sadness by drinking alcohol. After 6 months of staying with alcohol he became Alcoholic.
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*where
His mother struggled to feed him and herself two mouthfuls, so far everything was going well. His mother was killed by Gang wars that happened in the area they live.
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you repeated he is sleeping twice
He is sleeping on an old iron bed. The mattress is quite old and he's sleeping.
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deep fridge=freezer in America
In his Room there's a small fridge whose height will reach his waist. There's no deep fridge system in that fridge. There's a little alcohol & stale food.
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would instead of will, who, them instead of them, and add be
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you need 2 A's in this sentence
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me a
「 Really ?? I thought you would make Slave or something similar to them. 」(MC)
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the
「 Ok I will help. Hmm maybe you can release boredom of me and my friends. 」(R.O.B.)
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being
「 You come here after being killed by electrocuted. 」(???)
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you forgot the words know and molecule
「 (・o・;) Oh you don't that you're in Void ? This placee is so special that there's No Space-Time, There's Not Single Air on this placee 」(???)
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A better word choice would be I'm Instead of I am for the first part of the sentence
Oh my god i am in a coma or i can't move any of my limbs or feel my limbs because i am in a coma.
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no
- Should i relocate in another website like Fanfiction*dot* net?
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
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