Natsch - Profile

it was good until it became a dungeon novel . i was expecting him to become a adventurous rock as it slowly reveal the world . seriously there was a lot of ideas to evolve a rock but dungeon isn't everything

pretty good start the story is alright issue (for me) the system is not as idle as the title seem to be and the date seems to be unnecessary considering the mc character (slow, don't want to deal with other) as for the world building, i think its a bit grand to start from practically zero to universe. and lastly the author comment is immersion breaking coz its too long. make it short and concise so it doesn't mix with the story