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No plot at all , all caracter including mc feel like one dimensional, like they don't have any feelings and thought process at all, they are there because author need them to tell the story...... No plot devlopement at all.... totally amature writer..... But good luck author for your next work and try to develop the caracter well

Thanks author, you are doing grate ...... I think you can become a professional author plz contact some webnovel authority and get a professional editor..

thanks for your reply........ wanna ask about which chapter will volume 1 will finish

theme of this novel was smart mc. so when a mc hoooked up original plot girl with some random caracter with no benefit or for some random caracter good side it doesn't feel like a smart man would do that, if he doesn't have a kink of watching his woman ntr him only make his little worm stand! don't take it parsonal as I said understand that besides xia qingyue, other heroine need a lot of effort to reach god realm but he has cultivation resources so if he want he can make his woman reach god realm.... but as a smart man he chose to let them go and I'm ok with this but if that same smart man try too hook the heroines to a random caracter with no importance what so ever and for the sake of there good side it feel forced and low ic man and a man with special kink would do that....... this fan-fic was ok but now it was garbage...... don't read if you don't want to see original heroines with some random mob....