Askael

So I see a lott of rage here. Do youre job man, you do it good. I dont know where you are going with the MC and his potential love interest but I want to see it. Just to say, I find it à litle bit to fast for an engagement. BUT !!! You did good before and I am shure you will continue the good work. Do what you want, I want to see it. English isn't my native tongue so excuse my errors please.

So I do not know if you are translating thé novel or not, but on webnovel there is another one who is making a copy of this novel at the name "Marvel: The Enlightened One"

Mec, ton histoire est géniale, elle a un potentiel énorme, avec des personnage attachants. Je ne sais pas si mes mots te parviendront mais j'espère énormément te voire continuer sur cette histoire. Voire un personnage progresser avec les moyens du bord et non pas avec un système surpuissant est ce qui rend les histoires intéressantes et je suis heureux que tu en fait une avec un aussi grand potentiel.

I realy liked youre novel, if you need more time can you at least tell us. For now I will stop cheaking it for New chapter.

You have an amazing Novel, but if I can sans something, the system part is usless with the character you have. You've made à great character who dosent need help from it and the part where he use it is something that can be made with the character own imagination using his knowledge of other manga (nen thread -> chakra thread) or by leveling his own kekkei genkai (the bones corrosive form dosent need the clover card). The mass of diverse power make is effort usless in front of them or make his strength to much op for the challenge he encounter, and in a way, in the end, it break the story path.