While I do think purpose is important, half of this chapter at most of the previous chapter have been repeating the same things: Sabrina and Melvin’s family
Both were determined to give their all to protect and heal Sabrina, even if that meant they had to exceed their limits and enter dangerous fields.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
This is like saying: he is rich due to his money. Maybe mentioning the business procured from academies or some specialization may be more fitting.
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Fantasy · _Orange_
He lacked points
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Fantasy · _Orange_
Is this a pun? 👀
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Fantasy · _Orange_
After gold coins, “mana stones” are…
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Fantasy · _Orange_
I would use dashes here. -well you will fail anyway-…
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Fantasy · _Orange_
This guy gotta chill out, when growing up gender is not a focus. Love the realist racism displayed by the way (strong emphasis on “realistic”)
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Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
Wait, wasn’t that Bi teacher only receiving 1000 gold coins per month? That would make 500 gold coins a hefty sum.
[A hundred gold coins can probably be exchanged for five of these broken doors, and yet you are claiming 5000 gold coins from me as reparation fee? Even scammers don't scam others like that!]
Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya
People tend to believe more things they come up with by themselves… Author is fully applying this principle
On the other hand, Zhang laoshi kept using facts to prove his innocence.
Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya
I swear 50% of the novel so far consisted of stat info
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Games · Alekzi
Why did you even walk bro… why do you even breath?! Maxwell woke up and chose violence
Maxwell put his fork and knife on the plate— he wiped his mouth with a napkin, ''Why did you do that?''
Games · Alekzi
Considering there was no emotional investment whatsoever, I don’t feel it’s particularly a “nasty” way of thinking as it is shallow.
Seeing such a beautiful woman, Lin Fan didn't care about Xu Ruo and instead downgraded her to a concubine and replaced her status with Shu Ling as his wife.
Urban · Kurupts
Hello! I know the novel is completed, and maybe it has great development, but I stringly suggest proofreading it as there are several inconsistencies throughout the text, making it hard to read. Hope it’ taken as positive feedback.
ch 0 2 The Return of a Student
Urban · 0Mashroom
Not me reading this at 1am 💀
Meal after meal of takeout led to gastritis and fatty liver, while irregular sleep patterns and overtime work resulted in cervical spondylosis, arrhythmia, and tendinitis for him.
Cultivating From Obtaining Experience
Urban · Boiled Turbot