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Update: Very very good lol.

Review for first 20 chapters: One of the strangest one piece fics I have ever read. MC is very unpredictable as he generally does whatever he wants. İt is an interesting read though, some chapters are hilarious. Mc gets strong fast but time passes slowly in the story. So far mc got like 3-4 times stronger in 4 days yet it took around 20 chapters. So it is not like a typical action-adventure fic as it has slice of life in it as well, even though it is not in the tags. Also canon... it is gone by now and I have no idea where this story will go.

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.............................................................................., .......................................................................... So repetetive and clich.

Honestly, one of the best webnovels I have ever read.(I read A LOT) .... . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .

It is entertaining for a good while, then it gets EXTREMELY REPETİTİVE: So, if you are bored and have nothing to read give it a go but there is a good chance you will be get burnt out or lose interest somewhere along the way. Or Idk it happened to me and there are novels as long as this that I binged.

Okay, I am a little burnt out right now, I will probably continue this at some point when I have time, I will update the review at that time. I hope you don't lose motivation bcz of this review, I think the novel has potential, it jsut didn't clcik with me. Well, I just read 50 chapters or something so ıdk maybe it gets much better later on.

İnteresting for now, hopefully stays that way.................................................. ........................................................

I like this a lot. Entertaining, Mc is not a beta or pushover, no simping, smart op mc, plot progresses well, side characters are entertaining, world is well fleshed out. Honestly, one of the best you can find in this website. Especially among the original male leads that are currently ongoing, I think this is the best.

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I will update this review if I read any further but for now I lost all interest.

Honestly, I expected good things from this novel based on it's score and ranking. But it was extremely disappointing. İnfo dumps, extreme lack of character development, slow plot progression, meaningles dialogues etc. I read around 50 chapters, Idk if it's get any better, but those chapters were enough for me to drop this. Grammar is not bad and novel has some potential if thsese issues handled well but for now, very disappointing.

I replied but forgot to tag you :'( . What i meant was his strength rose so quick that it killed the suspense for me. Also will it be canon from now on?