jack196 - Profile

Thank you for this wonderful story! It's a good mix of action, adventure, and humor in a well built world. I hope one day we get more stories about Han Xiao, Ames, and Hila.

Ending really seems incomplete, there's a lot of loose ends left and everything seems rushed. But overall it was a good story with some fun moments in it.

A great story overall, though the ending felt really rushed and incomplete. Hope there's a sequel that goes over the planetary war and the relationships.