For Real.... if the author just likes the comment of some dude translating his chapter instead of fixing it im dropping this novel right here
Chapter 12 made me write my review. Pretty much everything about Adam, why is it important what he did a week before the outbreak if he didnt even leave with them. If i find the time i will reread the earlier chapters
Overall i like it. It's a good Story with an interesting idea, but it seems really jumpy and disconnected sometimes. Some of the flashbacks of of random background characters are boring to me instead of aiding in worldbulding because some of them will probably never be mentioned again.
Ofc the heros instantly believe bankrobbers without any proof because of reasons...
*authors note* edited totally sloshed. Sentences are all there, you'll find them 🤣 Keep it
This is really good. If you want to read a Story with an evil Mc, the tags are there for a reason. But they are not the focus of the Story just for the sake of being there, at least until chapter 49 when i wrote the review. Writing quality is really good, give it try.
Is it just me or did this chapter feel jumbled
Bro... did he inhale the vacuum to spit out a vacuum wind? where did the water come from to freeze the asteroid that already sits at a cozy -270°C😆
You would expect that the MC to be a sociopath but doesnt seem like it. Maybe he will have character into a sociopath..................................
In 9 chapters he goes from genin to moving at 1 billion times the speed of light. This novel could be a really long synopsis of an actual novel. Let me give an example. Paragraph 1: He starts to learn seals Timeskip half a year Paragraph 2: He became the god of seals and he is about to create the most powerful and difficult seal ever created Paragraph 3: he does just that Its not really interesting for me Writing quality is good, updates are stable at chapter 12, story & character & World development doesn't really exist