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Yeah, a good lynching. With barbs

This chapter was hilarious! Thanks! Kind of had an anime feel to it haha.

You say "hmmf" and other grunting sounds way too much Just saying, real english speakers or humans in general, dont speak that way. Unless your really wierd.

I know this is meant to be comedy but... why doesnt this guy have a spine?! He acts so weak willed when he used to be a successful lawer. Have you ever met a really good lawer? They're confident, strong willed, have really well controlled emotions and a great poker face. It just doesn't fit the story, unless I'm missing something.

Just some friendly advice. Maybe try and work on the character dialogue. It sounds too simple and rigid. Kind of like the dialogue in a really old game. Keep up the good work, the plot is good in my opinion.

I suppose it's possible to develope slower if the mother is pregnant with two children, one egg from each fallopian tube. It's rare, but I think its possible to conceive while already pregnant. They couldn't be a split egg, otherwise they would be born at the same time though. I dont know... any thoughts anyone?

I can't get enough of this... is this what addiction feels like?! Haha jk. Thanks for the chapter!

I liked this. Thanks for the chapter

So... I think the author is a little confused grammatically. Dress, does not always mean clothed. Or at least not in the traditional way your thinking. The way you are using the term, makes it sound as if harry is actually wearing a dress. As in the long girly clothing reserved for woman and cross dressers. You should say, "harry went shopping for clothes, and got many different outfits." Or something similar. Hope this was useful! 👍 Thanks for the chapters thanks.

I always thought it extremely stupid how harry simply accepted the wand he did in cannon. I dont know any kid that age who would simply be like "oh, this is related to my parents death and my suffering? Alright! Here's some money!" ... If it were me i would find a different wand or even shop after such an ordeal.

Such is the way of the animal kingdom. Savage and brutal. There are no punches pulled.

Dam it all... sorry, I was just hoping he'd go the fleur. You know since the malfoys are originally french, I thought.

I know how you feel. He should've gone for something exotic if he was going to change bloodlines. Even fairy would've been cool. Or maybe some obscure bloodline.